Beardog
12.07.14 | If you don't like it, fine, but leave some constructive criticism so I can improve on my new songs! |
ScuroFantasma
12.07.14 | Dude this is great, really dig it |
Beardog
12.07.14 | thanks :) |
pedro70512
12.07.14 | You had me at Crack the Skye. |
Beardog
12.07.14 | what do you think of the song though? |
pedro70512
12.07.14 | listening now. |
pedro70512
12.07.14 | I like a lot of the ideas, particularly the opening minute and a half. It's got a cool Intronaut vibe to it. The lulls seem to hold up the momentum sometimes though, so switching the order of some parts might give it a better flow. Can you record without the programmed drums? This has the makings of a killer jam. |
Beardog
12.07.14 | I don't have an acoustic drum kit and no recording gear so yeah that will be expensive... what do you mean with the lulls though? |
pedro70512
12.07.14 | That part in the middle that really gets going -- with the double kick drum -- I feel like it should be at the end, because it feels like a climax. You put it between two slow parts with synth strings and flute, so it seems isolated. If you reprised it at the end it would be a great ending, too (though you've that that harmonized fadeout that works well already).
I can record some drums over it just to see what it sounds like if you'd like. You know, just for shiggles. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e33ULG4B0W4 |
Beardog
12.07.14 | that would be awesome! and yeah i could try changing that up a bit |
pedro70512
12.07.14 | Do you have a version without the drums? I'll throw a click track down over it on my end and see if
I can get it to you tonight. |
Beardog
12.07.14 | I don't really have time tonight, if you could drop your email somewhere I can send it to you tomorrow! |
Final Origin
12.07.14 | As always Beardog, love the compositions you create. Interesting sounds and great vibes. As pedro says, your music could really take off with some acoustic drums, it will add another dimension to it. |
Beardog
12.07.14 | Yeah I really want to do that, but it's really expensive... I would probably be able to drum all the songs myself but, it isn't possible financialy :P |
Beardog
12.17.14 | I updated my song, it's probably not the final version but I haven't got time to finish it... Have fun! - https://soundcloud.com/kars-landman/progressive |
Beardog
03.28.15 | https://karslandman.bandcamp.com/track/contrary-progressive-metal-instrumental
Okay the instrumental is now officialy finished, mixing and all are done, only vocals are left! Please tell me what you think! |
