cylinder: posted a new song today

cylinder 01.24.22	feel free to adjust your volume accordingly, i ain't the best producer yet. but for a demo i think this sounds pretty decent
combustion07 01.24.22	I can dig it
DungeonBoy 01.24.22	Listened to it twice. I like your flow and delivery. The beat is really great. The mix is okay. If you want songwriting critique (just my opinion) I'd scratch the chorus vocals on the intro and just have instrumental, it starts out very abruptly with the vocals. It sounds like you're going for kinda a lazy loose thing with the chorus vox and I think the song will hit better from the get go if you nix them on the intro. Some of the annunciation in the verse is jarring and some if it flows really well, it's kinda a mixed bag, but most of it is really good. I dig it dude, the chorus is a bit weak performance wise but other than that it's really cool
cylinder 01.24.22	@DungeonBoy Yeah, you might have a point with the chorus vox at the intro. I just wanted to fill that space somehow, but you're right that it starts pretty abruptly. Might just leave it instrumental. Thanks for the feedback man, it's much appreciated. If you get a chance, I'd like to hear what you think of the other tracks as well
cylinder 01.24.22	@combustion cool man, thanks for listening!