MarsKid
11.10.20 | Posting again for visibility: https://twitter.com/MitchellWorden
Thanks for the loved and support, Sput. Time to push writing to the next level. |
unclereich
11.10.20 | love this |
MarsKid
11.10.20 | Thanks! |
Bedex
11.11.20 | you handsome man and handsome soul |
MarsKid
11.11.20 | Aw, thanks. That means a lot. |
Uzumaki
11.11.20 | Yesssssssss. |
BlushfulHippocrene
11.11.20 | Ooo, v nice. Maybe drop the wordpress link here, too, for idiots like me w/o twitter. |
MarsKid
11.11.20 | Thanks folks. I updated to add a direct link! |
Uzumaki
11.11.20 | Confirmed, I am also a Twitter-less idiot. |
JesperL
11.11.20 | followed, excited to see your hashtag content :] |
Kompys2000
11.11.20 | Hell yeah, dropping a Twitter follow and looking forward to whatever you end up posting to that wordpress! |
MarsKid
11.11.20 | Thanks buds, there will be stuff happening today! |
MarsKid
11.11.20 | First post is up today! Bumping for relevancy.
https://marskidpoems.wordpress.com/2020/11/11/the-french-revolution-was-a-hoax/ |
parksungjoon
11.11.20 | feature pls |
MarsKid
11.11.20 | That'd be the dream |
MarsKid
11.13.20 | New one up today! https://marskidpoems.wordpress.com/2020/11/13/having-a-domestic-with-an-inanimate-object/ |
SteakByrnes
11.13.20 | Dude hell yea |
dbizzles
11.13.20 | I'll hit you with a follow |
MarsKid
11.13.20 | Thanks pals! This post ended up gaining some traction so I'm super thankful for the early support. |
dbizzles
11.13.20 | Always good to have an outlet. Everything I write gets lost in the void on hellopoetry lol. |
MarsKid
11.13.20 | Oooo man I tried there for a while! I had an account going but it was just too much of a grind to ever keep it up. I also have a lot of fundamental issues with how it is structured. It doesn't make sense and sets new poets up to fail from my perspective. |
dbizzles
11.13.20 | Yeah, it's definitely oversaturated and getting views feels like a popularity contest. I don't care that much about it, but as far as finding a real audience, getting feedback, whatever, it's not good. I've had my account for YEARS, though. It was much better like 10 years ago lol. |
MarsKid
11.13.20 | The system just unequally favors writers that are already established. It also relies heavily on the "give and get" concept, and after years of giving, I've learned that rarely gets you anywhere. For one thing, no one is guaranteed to ever feel obligated to check your work even if you checks theirs.
Secondly, for websites like AllPoetry, it is impossible to get a poem noticed at all (or even posted without being a paying member) unless you comment on other poems. This often means that no one *really* reads what you wrote and are mostly out to get their required comments so they can get their own views. |
dbizzles
11.13.20 | Definitely a broken system, but I gotta put them somewhere :) |
MarsKid
11.13.20 | Well I'd hate for them to go away. Maybe you should put them out there yourself as well! I know my method hinges a lot on luck though lol |
MarsKid
11.15.20 | Got a new one up today folks: https://marskidpoems.wordpress.com/2020/11/15/visual-replays-now-in-stereo-format/ |
bludngorevidal
11.17.20 | Will check this out in honor of our wheels consisting largely of the same genres. perhaps our souls are tortured similarly? |
MarsKid
11.17.20 | Haha wow, our charts have a lot of similarities. Hope you enjoy what you read! |
MarsKid
11.17.20 | New one today! https://marskidpoems.wordpress.com/2020/11/17/wanting-to-but-not-being-able-to-want-to/ |
MarsKid
11.17.20 | Someone awarded me a Reddit Gold today, I count that as a victory |
MarsKid
11.19.20 | Another new post! https://marskidpoems.wordpress.com/2020/11/19/promises-came-with-threats/ |
SteakByrnes
11.19.20 | Kinda a sad one, but it was a good one! |
MarsKid
11.19.20 | Thanks pal : ) |
MarsKid
11.20.20 | Two in a row woop woooooop https://marskidpoems.wordpress.com/2020/11/20/and-that-day-the-clouds-marched-away/ |
lukeofthelip
11.22.20 | man this is great
beautiful writing well done! |
MarsKid
11.22.20 | Thank you! I really appreciate it |
MarsKid
02.04.21 | Since I last posted here, I've reached 150 follows and have experienced consistent monthly growth. Currently moving to send submissions to bigger magazines to increase my presence, as well as looking into doing YouTube stuff. Future's bright. |
SteakByrnes
02.04.21 | Hell yea brother movin on up |
MarsKid
02.04.21 | That's what we doin matey. All build up no tear down. |
Pon
02.04.21 | Big love for my man Mars |
Uzumaki
02.04.21 | Fuck yeah, Mars! Fantastic to hear! |
MarsKid
05.31.23 | Let's talk poetry :^) |
Koris
05.31.23 | Would I be able to post one of my recent poems here? I felt pretty good about it :] |
MarsKid
05.31.23 | Yes this is now the poetry thread woop woop |
Koris
05.31.23 | So I posted this in the casual convo a month or so ago, but I was proud of it š
Aftermath
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Iām back in the city again,
pensive, wandering about
as I wonder what to do
without old crutches, old curses
carrying my daily verses.
Tick tock, tick tock,
the clock in my subconscious
always ticking, consigning me
back to my glass prison;
all reason discarded,
mental treason disregarded.
When will I progress?
When will I suppress
my burning desires?
Only time will show me
where I really am;
only strife will show me
my authentic self,
self-will in limbo,
self-care in suspension.
When all color turns to monochrome,
will I turn to a false refuge?
When all bliss turns to sorrow,
will I bury my newfound clarity?
Back in the city again,
I wander with heart in hand
as a tempest brews within;
temptation and redemption clash
as I process every old sin.
Only time will tell
whether I reached heaven
or created my own hell;
only my inner blues
can face me if I face
my own private cell. |
MarsKid
05.31.23 | Nice man, thanks for sharing! Some of the lines here really shine, especially fifth stanza. Keep it going! |