madrigal30
01.16.20 | criticism welcomed :P |
DungeonBoy
01.16.20 | bandcamp, soundcloud, or youtube link? |
madrigal30
01.16.20 | done
https://soundcloud.com/wastedspaceband/st-bart |
DungeonBoy
01.16.20 | Were you aware there is already a band named Wasted Space with music on Bandcamp? |
madrigal30
01.16.20 | was made aware. they have not reached out, and appear to be inactive, but found out about a month ago. |
DungeonBoy
01.16.20 | for what it's worth it certainly has that emo-punk ethos |
madrigal30
01.16.20 | thank you dude. certainly the atmosphere im goin for :P |
SlothcoreSam
01.16.20 | Checking now.
I like it.
The distorted guitar is too loud and drowns out the drums and bass. But i like the riffs. From what i hear of the bass, it's cool, the drumming keeps the track ticking along nice.
But i love the vocals, the melody and the song structure up until the 1:52 mark, the break down/outro would be better as a post song interlude.
Fix the production, tone down the guitar, and sing into the mic, and I'd fuck with this all day.
You guys got potential. 😎 |
SlothcoreSam
01.16.20 | Poison Ivy, is great too. Maybe even better.
Keep it up. |
SputnikAIDS
01.16.20 | the mix seems a little off. maybe turn the vocals up a bit |
DungeonBoy
01.16.20 | "sing into the mic" agreed, there are parts where the vocals become completely inaudible, and other parts where they clip. Get a good vocal take on this since it's such an important part of the music, I think the song will greatly benefit. |
madrigal30
01.16.20 | wow, that's an awesome point. listening back to it on some monitors at school and i can actually hear a lot of what you're talking about. i think it might be time to get better mixing headphones and work on that a bit more. also, thanks for listening to poison ivy ! :) |
