veninblazer
01.23.26 | Peep this if you want |
Hawks
01.23.26 | LETS GOOOOO VENIN!!!! |
veninblazer
01.23.26 | HOPE YOU LIKE IT HAWKSSSS |
Hawks
01.23.26 | Will jam HARD. |
veninblazer
01.23.26 | Everyone seems to be loving this thing so far, I'm so happy |
Hawks
01.23.26 | Good to hear that!! :] |
mkmusic1995
01.23.26 | Will definitely give this a spin at some point! Looks like a fun time! |
arthropod
01.23.26 | The list of inspirations is a goddamn chimaera
congratulations on releasing the thing |
DungeonBoy
01.23.26 | Congrats |
cloakanddagger
01.23.26 | Will definitely give this a spin, congrats on the release! |
veninblazer
01.23.26 | Hope y'all dig it as much as the peeps on RYM are
3.88/5 avg, i'm so happy to see the hard work paying off |
Hawks
01.23.26 | Gonna jam either tonight or tomorrow. |
jrlikestodance
01.23.26 | Happy release day! |
Lasssie
01.24.26 | Theres something a bit off with the clean vocals, but it might be a mixing issue. Like the overall sound and vibe tho! |
RunOfTheMill
01.25.26 | Hey venin, don't think we've ever spoken before. I checke dhtis on a whim and I love supporting sputter music. Your instrumentals are awesome, evocative, and touching. Honestly songwriting is pretty stellar. I agree with Lasssie though, the vox I think, are not mixed great. Idk if it needs some layering or what, but it's especially evident with the cleans. Hope I'm not being too harsh, there's a lot to be impressed with here. |
Beardog
01.25.26 | Yeah vocal mixing is indeed off, also not in tune everywhere but oh well, can't say I do that better lol. All in all, with improved mixing this could be really nice cause musically this for sure has potential! Would also love a bit more production on the keys and drums, sounds a bit too 'plug-in' but that's also me nitpicking haha
But congrats, great foundation to start building upon! You for sure have songwriting talent |
Beardog
01.25.26 | Sorry for the harsh rating, but I have to be honest in that regard. Know that you have tons of potential! if you want any help with production, vocals or drum writing perhaps I can support. Excited for a next release for sure. |
Lasssie
01.25.26 | For me this could be great but my main complaint is mostly the clean vox. The plug in sound comes with the DIY territory to some degree, but im an amateur myself in that department! |
DarkNoctus
01.25.26 | i'm looking for more experience with mixing/mastering so if you want i can have a stab at this for free. hmu on my page if you're interested. nice work! |
Sevengill
01.25.26 | congrats! long projects are so rewarding to finally release. I'll give it a spin but the list suggests it not be me jam. only one way to find out. |
Sevengill
01.25.26 | oooo you should def take Noctus up on that 👀 |
Hawks
01.25.26 | Agreed! |
Scoot
01.25.26 | noctus i may need something similar
demo - https://kannatama.bandcamp.com/track/every-monument-will-turn-to-dust-demo |
arthropod
01.25.26 | Precautiously listened to the first Dead Inside Like Me, it's amazing. |
Emim
01.25.26 | Really did enjoy a lot of the riffs and melodic lines, both synth and gutair, but the vocals and lyrics really drag this down. Some of that I'm sure could be tightened up just in the mixing department, but I think some vocal training would help out a lot. There's a lot of potential here and tbh I enjoyed aspects of it way more than I would've guessed.
Also as a drummer the drums sound very programmed. Drums are tough to make sound natural, but throwing a little more variance into fills and repeating patterns would go a long way. |
Veks
01.25.26 | "Deserted" is such a cool song. Would love to hear this with some more work on production (like the others said the biggest improvement would be vox production).
Keep going my friend! |
veninblazer
01.26.26 | Thanks for all the feedback! I had a lot of trouble with a lot of the elements admittedly, but I think I was also partially trying to migrate this project over to a new environment in spots towards the end. Might explain some of the roughness in the instrumental production. Vocal production has always been a bit of a weaker spot for me, partly due to dissatisfaction with the way my vocals sound recorded. There's an echoey reverb that I tried to tame and could never quite figure out. No worries, you all were being completely fine.
Also, I'm waiting for Sputnik to approve the new artwork, because I swapped out the original image for another one. Didn't even realize it was AI. Silly me.
As for Noctus... due to technical limitations I would have to say maybe we can collaborate on a future project instead! |
arthropod
01.26.26 | Venin, did the other vocalist do screams, cleans or both? I swear it all sounds like only one person all along. |
veninblazer
01.26.26 | both, he took lead on the first track and then a lot of the screams, a few cleans after
then I took screams on some other tracks |
MTObsidian
01.26.26 | Congrats venin! Will check when I have the chance. Great work on getting your art published and out for others to enjoy! |
Beardog
01.26.26 | Oh I thought it was you doing everything Venin haha |
gabba
01.26.26 | Congrats venin, it’s great to see another sput-associated album being released! Also, I’m glad you’re active again, I saw your takes on New Bermuda the other day and thought you’d be also gone for good. |
veninblazer
01.26.26 | i mean im probably gonna dip again i just needed to shill my music |
MTObsidian
01.26.26 | Oh, bummer. I too was hoping you were back. Well, I'll still check your album when I can and hopefully we'll see a post from you here and there! |
veninblazer
01.26.26 | never say never. this site's clearly on borrowed time, i don't even know if I can secure my passwords here the way i've been doing everywhere (had a bit of a security scare recently) because this place's ability to change that is borked, but thankfully no one gives a fuck enough about sput anymore for it to matter |
jrlikestodance
01.26.26 | Pls stay around |
Egarran
01.26.26 | Thank you for the music. |