Snide: New Black Malachite Song

Snide 12.16.16	In case description link doesn't work - https://blackmalachite.bandcamp.com/track/death-single
DungeonBoy 12.16.16	will check.
Snide 12.16.16	@Dungeon: Can't wait to hear what you think! @AIDS: Nice username
onionbubs 12.16.16	AnAIDSReturns
onionbubs 12.16.16	it's not bad just not really my thing. how i generally feel about your music tbh. pretty good job tho
SitruK6 12.16.16	pretty good actually. nice job ;)
Sinternet 12.16.16	is this supposed to be an interlude?
Sinternet 12.16.16	also why is there a really deep bassline at 1:32?
DungeonBoy 12.16.16	Dude, if you made a whole album like this I would enjoy it very much.. are the other tracks on the 2nd EP going to be similar? The only criticism I have is that bass note at 42 seconds doesn't do a lot for the song for me. It's just a distraction to what would otherwise be a beautiful piece of music.
DungeonBoy 12.16.16	"also why is there a really deep bassline at 1:32?" I agree, you really don't need these.
Trebor. 12.16.16	your profile pic makes me cringe every time
SitruK6 12.16.16	"also why is there a really deep bassline at 1:32?" I agree, you really don't need these. i also agree with this.
Snide 12.16.16	@Onion: Thanks fam @Sitru: Thank you! @Sinternet: No it's the closing track, and I just felt that the bassline fit with the song nicely. @Dungeon: Yeah man the second EP is based around this track's style. It's completely different from the other three EPs
ScuroFantasma 12.17.16	Nice track
Sinternet 12.17.16	i guess as an outro it's semi-decent but the bassline is so random and unstructured, it distracts from a fairly pretty melody and it really doesn't fit. I'd remove it if i were you but it's your decision so if you like it go for it.
CaimanJesus 12.17.16	is this one oriental too
Snide 12.17.16	@Scuro: Thank you! @Sinternet: Does the bassline really feel that random? I was trying to use it as a segment into the next layered part of the melody as kind of a transitional thing. @Caiman: No fam it isn't oriental.
SitruK6 12.17.16	the bassline does feel that random. also it doesn't really feel like it needs a "transitional thing", at least imo.
ButteryBiscuitBass 12.17.16	This is pretty cool
Snide 12.17.16	@Buttery: Thank you! @SitruK6: Well damn, I might remove the bassline for the full release then. I do need some sort of segmenting thing though I feel, it doesn't sound right without it.
SitruK6 12.17.16	You don't have to remove it if you feel it fits. Remember its your music not ours.
GhostOfSarcasticBtrd 12.17.16	trebor your mere existence irritates me.