Gameofmetal: Did another new track, need moar feedback/opinions

Gameofmetal 08.04.15	https://soundcloud.com/colossus-in-slumber/new-demo-2
Final Origin 08.04.15	Thanks for the mention on your list :) Loved the clean melody at the start, quite somber and isolated. I thought the transition from clean to harsh was too sudden and threw me a little, so that could be an area to work on if you want to cause I know its a demo. That lead melody over the distortion at the end was pretty sick.
Gameofmetal 08.04.15	yea transitions tend to be a weak spot with me but i didnt concern myself too much over these for now. Figured I'd just smooth them out best I can for the final version. Thx for listening tho
Gameofmetal 08.05.15	bump
Gameofmetal 08.05.15	desperate bump pt. 2
Archelirion 08.05.15	Definitely something going on here, I'd say perhaps bring in something (maybe tremolo picking, maybe another layer harmonising it) on the second half of the initial part, as after a minute with not much else going on it seems a bit long. Loved that end bit, was some seriously neat stuff.
Gameofmetal 08.05.15	thx for listening, glad you liked it. Ill take your thoughts into consideration, def gonna work on it more.