Hmm... It's got something going for it, for sure. Yet somehow it's consistently missing something. But I don't think it's because it changes too much or too little. I feel like it's a sense of themes not being contrasted in the proper fashion. It's like each part here sounds good on it's own, and it technically belongs where it is on the album, but just because it's structurally sound on a technical level doesn't mean the contexts are all appropriate. This makes emotional and mental processing for the listener a little bit of a jigsaw, which most people would opt for viewing as messy or disjointed. I do think there's potential here, though. I think a good number of parts here would've settled much better with just the slightest tweaks.
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