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Album Rating: 4.0
They've taken a huge influence from Gojira on this one to great effect; from the theme and lyrics, to the riffs and atmosphere.
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Hey my dude. No offence, but this is an incredibly sloppy review. Clocking in at just 238 words, you certainly lack enough points to warrant the 4/5 rating. I'll give some examples:
"Then comes "Black Mammoth" a heavy track both musically and lyrically".
This point is fine, but what makes the song come off as heavy? Just saying the song is heavy in both sound and lyricism doesn't give me much to work off of. Are the guitars sludgy due to the topic of the song? Is the song slow and methodical, or fast and doom-esque? You need to expand on these points.
"...but other tracks like "When The Bulbs Burn Out" and "Too Late" help to establish Fit For An Autopsy as a force to be reckoned with in the Deathcore scene."
How do these songs establish them as a force to be reckoned with? This is an extension of my last point. You have some good points considering your short length, but you need to further the points you are trying to make.
"For those left angry by the abortion Suicide Silence calls their new album..."
This sort of back-handed comment, and the tagline for the review, don't particularly have a place in your review considering you don't once compare the two bands. Expanding on this idea of FFAA succeeding in expanding their sound where SS failed miserably makes for a more intriguing and fleshed-out read.
Again, not trying to be rude, just helping you out dude. You start the review with an incredibly short description of the band, and then jump right into the album. Talking about their past albums and the progression (or perhaps regression) of their sound gets readers interested and intrigued as to how FFAA has produced an album worthy of a 4/5 rating.
Hope this helped man.
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also @cryptologus seeing that fucking gif the entire time I was writing that was the most uncomfortable experience of my life.
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these guys are so ehhhhhhh
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Flesh out your writing more. This is a really bare bones review and describing only a few random tracks (as opposed to the album's highs/lows and general style) feels really weird.
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Album Rating: 3.5
Deathcore release? Better make a reference to Suicide Silence's new album!
Seriously, we get it, that album is trash now can we move on?
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Not really a great review, but I've wanted to check this band for awhile. You should try and be less informal in your writing. Avoid awkward setups like "The first song I want to touch on is the first single"
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Album Rating: 4.0
some shitty one liners like "when you cut off the head, fucking two grow back" but otherwise this is their best so far
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listening now and the guitar tone is definitely straight Gojira, but the harsh vocals are straight Red Chord. Interesting combo, except for the unnecessary cleans.
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
This guy stole my soundoff
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
Best album to date
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Album Rating: 4.0
I appreciate the pointers @Drubbi, and thank you for being civil about your critique about my critique. You make valid points although I personally feel the more chilled out, informal style makes me somewhat unique (I hate using that word sometimes).
I'd like to point out that reviews don't need to be massive, it is a fact that these days people's attention spans are shorter. People don't want to read an essay, they just want to know if the subject of the criticism is good or not.
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you say "people" as if to imply the people using your review as a source of info aren't the ones commenting here, though. We people wouldn't be suggesting longer, fuller reviews if we didn't appreciate them over sparser ones like this tho >_> And using "short attention spans" as an excuse for being excessively minimal with your writing isn't really an excuse for poor organization, especially where there's that "Was this Review Well Written? Yes | No" link at the bottom of all reviews.
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Album Rating: 3.5
I stopped reading at the summary tbh
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Album Rating: 3.5
heard heads will hang and was pleasantly surprised. def got a subtle gojira vibe
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Actually pretty interested in this.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Production on this is incredible
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actually not even close lmao
studio production is what keeps these guys from sounding halfways decent
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Album Rating: 4.0
Completely disagree but ok if you say so
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