What's particularly striking about Drake as an "artist"
putting "artist" in quotations is a great way to ruin an opening sentence. it would read better (and less condescendingly) if you removed the quotes.
Generally an artists shortcomings
artist's *
also, you don't need "often" later in the same sentence as you already use "generally" in a similar sense.
It's been discussed at great length about his tendency to lean heavily on ghostwriters
His tendency to lean on ghostwriters has been discussed at great lengths * (reads better)
also, the production on this was mainly handled by PARTYNEXTDOOR and Boi-1da (i think... I'd have to double check). idk why you wouldn't mention that if you're taking shots at the production : /
there's some other errors, but ppl are already pointing some out VVV
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review is ok otherwise, tho idk if the 1/5 feels justified here or simply used provocatively
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Album Rating: 4.0
"Kanye's lesser clone"
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they have a totally different style my friend
"He benefited greatly from his very public beef with Meek Mill"
lmao, are you saying meek mill was ever bigger than drake at any point in meek's career?
""Energy" in which he attempts to swipe at his critics"
because your favorite rapper hasn't also done this (including kanye and dre, who you are apparently stuck on comparing drake to)
"This begs the question: What is Drake bringing to the table that's uniquely his?"
a refreshing new sound influenced more-so by rnb than most traditional hip hop artists, and yes, fantastic production
not to mention his lyrics have much more depth and are more universally relatable than kanye trying to convince the world he is a god, dre's ghostwritten lyrics about violence in compton and drugs
And the trend for every single fucking hip hop review on Sputnik to be compared to Kanye West continues.
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"Kanye's lesser clone"
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they have a totally different style my friend
that's you disagreeing, nothing to do with the review
so is the rest of ur comment, actually. u gon neg cuz u disagree?
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What is Drake bringing to the table that's uniquely his? listenable hip hop
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how's that uniquely his tho
listen to more hip hop´
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Album Rating: 4.0
"he's a stunningly sub-par rapper (he is). But that he's able" - use a comma rather than a full-stop
"as well but the" - comma here too
"there is they" - *is that
"up-and-coming artists. Thus forgiving" - comma here as well
"it was was an oddity" - one 'was' needed
"*sigh*"/"*rimshot*" - just don't
I won't neg seeing as it's your first review but your writing needs some work. Also, don't base your review of an entire mixtape on just the one song.
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"Also, don't base your review of an entire mixtape on just the one song."
when he did that tho
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how's that uniquely his tho
listen to more hip hop´ it appears i have listened to more than you have so i'll stick to my opinion being the right opinion
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well u can do whatever u wanna do tbh
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Album Rating: 4.5
o shit
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smae but make sure it doesn't conflict with what i deem right
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Album Rating: 4.0
"so is the rest of ur comment, actually. u gon neg cuz u disagree?"
neg because of all the errors
my comments were my opinion, has everything to do with the review wtf are you talking about
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Album Rating: 4.0
"when he did that tho"
Tracks mentioned:
Energy
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That's it
Also you spent a good quarter of the second paragraph going on about the Meek Mill beef, despite that happening several months after this was released
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Album Rating: 4.0
he was trying to claim the only reason for drake's notoriety is because of that beef
as if drake wasn't already arguably the biggest current name in the industry at that point and released a handful of largely successful albums/tapes over a period of years
as if meek mill hasn't always been a tier two internet rap star, at best
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matt: he mentioned one song. doesn't mean the whole review is based on that one song. actually, some reviewers don't mention songs at all, cuz it's a review of the album as a whole
guitarded: yeah ur comments were all about how u disagree with him, so it has nothing to do w/ the quality of the review at all, glad we agree
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Album Rating: 4.0
i just FUCKING said i negd because of the errors you cunt
go talk about things you at least have a minor grasp of elsewhere on the internet plskthnxbye
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reread my comment u stupid cunt
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good energy in thsi thread
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Album Rating: 4.0
i got high hopes for user Asdfp277, we gon see
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i'm not going to neg but god damn this review is lolworthy
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