Album Rating: 4.0
I tried something a little different this time. I wanted to review the album as a whole and not mention any song names. Tell me what you think.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Im excited to hear some New songs soon. I'm curious to see how they approached it after this.
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WE'LL SHAKE THE FUCKING GROUND
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Album Rating: 2.5
"If you read this and think that this band is another garbage deathcore band, you’re mistaking."
Mistaken*
"The Sticker on the album claims “For Fans of Lamb of God, Whitechapel, and Pantera. "
^ You didn't close the quotation.
"The Breakdowns are on of the reasons why the CD is so good."
one*
"there isn’t much here that will impress you."
you shouldn't say this if you're trying to convince us this album is excellent.
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Album Rating: 2.5
and you captialized a bunch of words that don't need capitalizing, such as "lyrics" and "majority".
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Album Rating: 4.0
Thanks malleus. I will fix Those. And i was just Trying to say that the guitar work isn't Whats going to impress you.
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^ What Malleus said.
Sounds interesting though, I'll give it a listen
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Carlito's Way kicks ass
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Album Rating: 4.0
Carlito's Way is my favorite track
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Album Rating: 4.0
I also like Heat, Intermission, Any Given Sunday, and Devil's Advocate a lot too.
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Album Rating: 2.5
just listened through the album
gotta wash this taste out of my ears
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Album Rating: 4.0
Lol. At least you tried.
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Review seems a tad short, but I guess you said everything that needed saying in a satisfactory review. Probably not gonna listen to this, though. I've heard "Carlito's Way" and it made me yaaaaaaaaaawn.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Intermission is hilarious.
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Better AfterBreak, just watch those points that Malleus picked out (that's a proof-reading thing there). Not to mention those kind of errors indicate that you really didn't go over your work (or if you did, you did it sparcely).
Again a bit more detail wouldn't kill you, for example:
There is a great range of high and low vocals, with everything from yelling to growling to gang vocals. How unique are the vocals? Sumerian Records founder Ash Avildsen stated that “Danny Leal has one of the most distinguishable and decipherable voices I have heard in years.”
While adding a positive light to your review and highlighting the positive score you have given this particular album. The quote you have used doesn't really tell the reader too much about the vocal lines. Maybe some comparisons to other vocalists might help with this. As for the question: "How unique are the vocals?". What you have described can be reminiscent of many other metal vocalists across the industry.
And you will find that single sentences are generally are a 'no-no'. Or at least i have been told many times. Lol.
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Regardless mate, this is one of your better reviews, and i think this 'new writing style' of yours could be explored a bit more. Will POS. Maybe it's just me who likes the 500 word reviews and that little extra detail but there are some ideas you could expand here and on your other reviews. Good one champ.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Thanks for the tips bro.
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Tis no problem, i'm just wondering why i can do that and have my reviews still suck dry concrete. Maybe cause it's my own personal work or something like that. Anyway keep at it man and let me know when the next one is up.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Well just keep working on it. And yeah Tuesday look for another review from me. I was going to do the New August Burns Red but Im sure there is going to be so many of those already. I got a few in mind I could do anyways.
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Get in first for ABR, and get the others half done, that way when you come back to them the ideas will be better and you can also pre-edit before you put them up. I'm sure there will be plenty of difference in rating's for ABR so it should be fine. And even if there are others i think you will get a fair amount of feedback for it.
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