Album Rating: 4.0
haha
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think 'jewish' should be capitalized. otherwise fine effort.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Fixed! Thanks man!
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Album Rating: 3.0
im honestly disappointed with this album. id say its no better or worse than their last album
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Album Rating: 4.0
Um, no offense sir, but the title track sounds nothing like GY!BE. Building up to a climax is not exclusively the thing of post-rock, as much as it might surprise you.
Also, don't use exclamation marks when talking about elements of an album, it makes you sound fanboy-ish. The line "The harmony vocals on "Here We Are, Juggernaut" are amazing! His range is at full display!" could easily be changed to something like "The harmony vocals on "Here We Are, Juggernaut" are amazing, with Claudio's range at full display." and would make the review seem much more professional.
Similarily, you mostly skim by most of the aspects of the album, only mentioning two tracks and never even discussing the instrumental work beside the drums. Try to be a bit more thorough to give the reader a better sense of what exactly makes the album so excellent
Just some constructive advice for improving your writing.
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Coheed is either hit or miss, and they are a big fricken miss for me.
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Album Rating: 3.5
The first paragraph is asinine babbling. Who cares what 2000 was? It doesn't even relate in the least to this album. Also, it's "descent".
This record is like Christmas for Jewish people. What does that even mean? Last time I checked, Jewish people don't celebrate Christmas and couldn't care less about it. So, this record is…. easily dismissible…. something I should totally ignore…. what could you possibly mean? This record combines elements of previous efforts and combines them to form a trifecta of awesomeness that is Coheed And Cambria. You're aware that this doesn't make sense either…. Chris Pennie also introduced new ideas with his new band Coheed And Cambria. Really? Is that his new band? I wouldn't have guessed from the fact that this is a Coheed review…
I'll stop there… needless to say, one of those negs are mine.
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Album Rating: 4.0
thanks for the criticism. Ill use these pointers on my next review!
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Album Rating: 3.8
This record combines elements of previous efforts and combines them to form a trifecta of awesomeness that is Coheed And Cambria.
Sounds like someone just finished watching Pineapple Express. And now you've annoyed Willie, do you know how long it takes to get him out of that state? Thanks a lot man
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WILLIE SMASH
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Album Rating: 4.0
Is it that bad?
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Album Rating: 3.8
Its pretty terrible, honestly
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Album Rating: 4.0
damn :/
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It seems like you just reviewed the album just for the sake of reviewing. I suggest sit down with this album and really write a review.
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if you put the same effort into actually describing things as you did into making quippy remarks you'd come out with something good.
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Album Rating: 4.0
I might review a record that doesn't have any reviews yet!
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That's always a good decision
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You might also stop using so damn many exclamation points!
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Album Rating: 3.0
Something else to keep in mind is that your review should defend your rating. I honestly can't dig up a purpose to this review, and I think that if you write with a purpose or an idea-oriented mentality (instead of a "let's just write about YOTBR" mentality), your reviews will turn out better.
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I'm not gonna neg, but this needs serious fixing.
-Take out the exclamation points. Your descriptions of the music aren't bad, but take these out and it'll look better.
-Get rid of the jokes in the review. No offense, but they're not funny and make your review look immature.
-Review is a bit fanboyish due to exclamation points and statements like "trifecta of awesomeness"
Just keep working at it, not everybody starts off as an amazing reviewer.
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