Divine
11.28.11 | Our story opens with facts and perspective
Hypnotic sayings from our only assassin
A collection of words general collective
A biased reflection, a biased accusation
I watched as they fell
Insight tells the tale
I’m not afraid, not at all
I’m not afraid, not at all
Tamed abroad in light
Our messenger sings and sleeps
A place…….a sound in sight
Thin air cryptic footsteps in place
Wild natured narrow hallways
Obscured views and isolated rooms
Right and left a choice between
………wide stance transcends appending doom
Our garden alone for one night
We placed our hands word for word
Moon lit doorways paved our light
Stanza and lines we shared words for everlasting words
We partake in deeds of man
Anger and rage we destroy our chair
Growth in character transients the land
Nothing at all…….I felt as they fall
Hands upon hands lay upon our door
Unlocked and open forevermore
Writings in posture ten-thousand feet from the floor
Empathy and sympathy……..human emotion forevermore
I'm not afraid anymore
I'm not afraid anymore |
Maniac!
11.28.11 | did you cut yourself afterward? |
North0House2
11.28.11 | That's pretty...
Poetic.
LOL |
StrangerofSorts
11.28.11 | oh dear. |
BallsToTheWall
11.28.11 | I'M ON A BOAT!!!! |
Wolfhorde
11.28.11 | ..DOIN FLIPS 'N SHIT! |
dammets
11.28.11 | Like fucking lasagna |
Divine
11.28.11 | "did you cut yourself afterward?"
I made a turkey sandwich |
Acanthus
11.28.11 | I found the rhythm more at the end then the beginning, but I read things strangely on occasion and it was enjoyable just the same. |
omnipanzer
11.28.11 | "did you cut yourself afterward?"
Hahahahahahaah
oooohhhhh, fuck me |
Divine
11.28.11 | the formatting got kind of fucked, so when you all read it every time there is a capital letter = new line |
Divine
11.28.11 | "oooohhhhh, fuck me"
omnipanzer, dude |
omnipanzer
11.28.11 | Shit was funny bruh. |
luschlotz
11.28.11 | rhymes are for douches. pretty good anyway |
InAbsentia
11.28.11 | Posting your poem on Sputnik: Not a good idea. |
Divine
11.28.11 | Fuck |
AlonsoHarris
11.28.11 | fuck the haters that was a good poem, and I hate poetry |
Timmons
11.28.11 | yeah its good, but ditto on what InAbsentia said |
BaseballJames
11.28.11 | *polite golf clap* I liked it. |
WashboardSuds
11.29.11 | its alright, a few parts make no sense but its not bad |