Deder545: Our First Demo!!!!

Deder545 08.22.11	http://soundcloud.com/her-majesty-4/the-storm-demo
Yuma310 08.22.11	its okay
Colliiiin 08.22.11	not to shabby
Hopeland 08.22.11	sounds good to me
Deder545 08.22.11	Thanks! Any criticisms? What do you guys think of the harmonies at the end? Also, you might need to turn the volume up; it is very low for some reason!
outline 08.22.11	The music's cool, but the singing part is a bit dull (like the guy's a decent singer, but the melody's a bit boring).
outline 08.22.11	Oh, and the lyrics are pretty weak, but that's basically a given for a first demo. Stay away from lame cliches (waves washing away memories, etc.).
Deder545 08.22.11	Hopefully the vocals get a little more "umph" when we move into a real studio
DeathsThread 08.23.11	Your inspiration seams to be in a very good place.
Benwx 08.23.11	not loading for moi
Deder545 08.24.11	what sucks about it my friend?
Benwx 08.25.11	everything that isn't rush sucks to sonic loaded for me... its aight. sure it'd sound much better with some better recording equipment. what did you guys use to record?