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Last Active 07-31-11 5:06 pm
Joined 09-23-09
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| Reviewing Help/suggestions/thread
I've sort of lost touch with writing, especially after an incredibly bloated, negative review of
the new Pierce The Veil release. To any who have read my reviews or who are willing to look
through my reviews starting with perhaps my Wait What review and on, I would love to hear
your thoughts and how I could improve writing. Perhaps point out positive or negative
aspects. Certain styles that work for me that I should focus on more. Would be much
appreciated, thanks. Oh and the list is digs that I've had ideas for reviewing. | | 1 |  | Merchant Ships
Shipsography
Insanely good mid-west Kinsella type band, really intense and emotional and whatnot. | | 2 |  | Fires Were Shot
Solace
Interesting ambient album that I've yet to fully uncover. | |
Enotron
07.01.10 | I deleted the Pierce The Veil review, it really wasn't good at all. | Enotron
07.01.10 | oh? Yeah you'll probably find a lot of repeated phrases. | Slum
07.01.10 | Professor Bulldog to the rescue! | Dryden
07.01.10 | sup bd | Ire
07.01.10 | sup booldawg | Enotron
07.01.10 | In the paragraph you're referring to, it's connected to the first, just in a bolder, declarative statement. The other one isn't connected at all, it just sort of appears that way. Regardless, I'll try to avoid the "and" thing. | Enotron
07.01.10 | I mentioned Led Zeppelin? Gonna read and fix the capital problem now. | Ire
07.01.10 | Sed Non Saetia
lol would make the greatest emo band ever. | Enotron
07.01.10 | Yeah pretense was pretty much what I was aiming for, more or less.
I appreciate the criticisms, I'll try to focus more on editing out small grammatical errors and awkward bits. | Enotron
07.02.10 | Bumping just in case anybody out there has a more stylistic based criticism. |
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