LogicTumble: How is my single sounding?

BlushfulHippocrene 05.13.17	This is really impressive, dude. Will keep an eye out for that album.
LogicTumble 05.14.17	Cheers man! Glad you liked it
Papa Universe 05.14.17	I don't really know, you guys. The music is soothing and pretty, but I'm not exactly a fan of the spoken word poetry. It may be because I in general tend to dislike spoken word music. Besides, I also feel more or less indifferent towards the text itself, but I can definitely see it working in context of an album. So far, I'm not that intrigued, honestly, but we'll see.
Illoomorpheme 05.14.17	Vocals need a bit more emotion and emphasis imo, even if just some more changes in the monotone 'poetry reading' rhythm you're using. Try to use more inflection; the tone of words matter almost as much as the words themselves. Music could also be a little more interesting. The vocals also need to be higher in the mix, the music makes some words difficult to make out. Actually enjoy the lyrics themselves and the theme though, so consider me a fan.
LogicTumble 05.16.17	Cheers guys. Illoomorpheme that feedback is great!