Hurricanslash: More Spoken Word (from Me)

Hurricanslash 09.15.14	https://manyfaces.bandcamp.com/album/the Yeah, so I released some more spoken word, and I put it in the database, but Sputnik hates me and doesn't recognise my .jpgs. Sweet! Anyways, whatcha think?
AnimalsAsSummit 09.15.14	gonna check it out and let you know
Hurricanslash 09.15.14	@Animals: Thanks man! @Cap: Whats up Captain? @Decay: Glad you enjoy it :) @OvDeath: If you would tell me why, I would probably get better at it.
AnimalsAsSummit 09.16.14	i appreciate the lyricism, but this wasn't my style. i don't know if it was flow or what because this is not a genre im familiar with, but some of these lines did evoke images, and that was good. it didn't grip me at all though. a rythmic approach to delivering the lines and maybe even adding sounds in the backround could be of help (imo). overall i commend the project's ambitions, but i can't say i was feeling it all that much
Hurricanslash 09.16.14	Thanks for the criticism! I will definitely keep this in my head for the next time I will do this. Thank you for listening at all, as well. :)
Hurricanslash 09.18.14	Update, got the damn artwork up now.