climactic
07.09.13 | went to a random part, heard you rhyme shit with shit, im out |
demigod!
07.09.13 | ill pass hard |
Cygnatti
07.09.13 | I hate nerdcore. it's almost as bad as deathcore. |
oltnabrick
07.09.13 | lakes you say the n word |
pizzamachine
07.09.13 | I don't even with this shit |
Cygnatti
07.09.13 | you ain't even fuck wid the lights on
you ain't even fuck wid the lights on |
Kman418
07.09.13 | lakes why |
IbenizGEO1
07.09.13 | Wtf is a Lakie Lakor |
bach
07.09.13 | Laked God feat. Skel-E - Cook to this shit |
Kman418
07.09.13 | Follow Lakes96, The Comedian's Comedian Pod, LANA DEL REY and others on SoundCloud. |
bach
07.09.13 | Worth a shot. Just promise him that he can get a line about deviant. |
tommygun
07.09.13 | what the fuck |
Keyblade
07.09.13 | stop this lakey |
Keyblade
07.09.13 | but i hate your influences |
Keyblade
07.09.13 | aight i'll check |
omnipanzer
07.09.13 | omg... did you record this in a sewer? |
omnipanzer
07.09.13 | This is a joke or serious?
I don't want to be unnecessarily harsh but if you're just playing around I'm not going to waste my time critiquing. |
omnipanzer
07.09.13 | Okay... honest opinion
I liked the backing track on the first track but you opened with a clip that was way to long... might be able to be forgiven in nerd-core.
The next two tracks I didn't hear the backing track because your vocal track was too loud and I was trying to figure out what you were saying. DICK... I got DICK and I think FUCK.
You need to equalize the track volumes.
Your vocal track needs to be mastered so it is the same quality as the rest.
You need to slow down and find the beat.
Write another song without any cuss words. You punch every obscenity in a way that makes it sound like they are more important than anything else you are saying... rookie mistake nothing most writers haven't done before. |
Supercoolguy64
09.22.14 | that was inpirational |
