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Last Active 01-15-20 11:44 pm
Joined 09-07-11
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| Poem
So guys, i write poetry, well I try at least. I'm not very good at revealing what I express (Introvert Alert). I'm trying to find something I'm good at. I write sometimes, and I figured what the heck, if i can survive criticism here I'll be alright. if you have writing tips please give feedback, if you think it sucks, try to give reason. Here goes nothing: | | 1 |  | Neil Young
On The beach
Turn of gloom, Sunset behold | | 2 |  | The Who
My Generation
Circles of black, Cover up bloom | | 3 |  | Grizzly Bear
Yellow House
Glow of Innocence, Sabotaged to decay, Sits among the room, awaits impending doom | |
tommygun
11.29.12 | that's pretty heavy dude, the album art for 3 matches your words too - not sure whether you did it deliberately but it's a nice effect
1 rules btw, props | ButteryBiscuitBass
11.29.12 | It's good man, flow could be a little tighter, but it's really nice. I like it.
I write too dude. It's an awesome way to relax - very therapeutic. | peaks40
11.29.12 | lol @butterybiscuitbass my cousin says the same thing to me cause i always worry about my writing. she just says stop worrying about structures and flow and be therapeutical. but of course i can't lol | peaks40
11.29.12 | thx @Tommygunn i really didn't realize the album art thing, i do now, pretty cool. |
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