UnnecessaryxBump
11.10.12 | dosent even deserve a bump |
menawati
11.10.12 | dam annoying alt that is but im still laughing |
menawati
11.10.12 | damn, caught like a fly in a web |
menawati
11.10.12 | ye after this thing im lisning to |
menawati
11.10.12 | oh this is new ? |
menawati
11.10.12 | ah thought it had been unnecessarily bumped lol |
menawati
11.10.12 | lol he's still bumping old shit |
menawati
11.10.12 | lol ok ok u like a small dog that clamps on and wont let go |
menawati
11.10.12 | ok listened |
menawati
11.10.12 | some of it sounded like it had potential, imo it needs to be slower and i didnt dig the percussion bits, hmm needs to sound spacier and more laid back |
menawati
11.10.12 | so, honest as i could be really |
Atari
11.10.12 | i'll check it out later if you remind me |
menawati
11.10.12 | ok but it just sounded a bit cluttered thats all dude |
Atari
11.10.12 | nah i'm watching sons of anarchy but seriously remind me later if you want more feedback |
Ethics
11.10.12 | the beginning was annoying as shit sounded really rigid and repetitive but as it progressed it got better and better. the mood matches the track name and your pic pretty well lol
vocals were the best part and whatever note you kept on striking in the background on that keyboard. i didn't really like how you just faded the loop from the beginning, felt like it could have went into an entirely new section of the song.. was really building up for something cool, well that part was cool but yeah just feedback idk music terms at all yet but im learning |
menawati
11.10.12 | i dont know if this is a good or bad thing but the main hook is still in my fucking head like sorta annoying but persistent haha |
Ethics
11.10.12 | i actually liked the percussion but if it had a little bit more variety and you turned it up a bit it could have added to the song. i think you should cut down the beginning a bit.. we got the point of what you were playing to us |
Ethics
11.10.12 | yeah the main hook sounds like some spooky graveyard from a pokemon game or something |
menawati
11.10.12 | haha yes or some old doom clone |
menawati
11.10.12 | thats a positive thing tho really |
Ethics
11.10.12 | np!!!!!! |
UnnecessaryxBump
11.10.12 | the drums sound kind of out of place nothing really flows well idk, especially the drums they are just distracting. |
menawati
11.10.12 | he's crungeing time sigs man |
AStableReference
11.10.12 | Name is a little too deathcore. |
AStableReference
11.10.12 | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clipping_%28audio%29 |
GiaNXGX
11.10.12 | It was ok, looking forward for the next track to see how you progress. |
menawati
11.10.12 | sputlakemusic.com |
menawati
11.10.12 | lol |
menawati
11.10.12 | (sorry lakes it made me laugh couldnt help it) |
Scoot
11.10.12 | not awful |