This is really well written dude! I do have a few gripes however
"Another thing I love about Daz is he always tries to work with people outside of Los Angeles." Is a weird transition because it turns from what was previously a more professional review style into a far more converstaional second half. There was never before a "I love this" kind of thing before, so suddenly "Another thing I love" comes a bit out of left field. You do both styles well, but I think you should pick one and stick with it.
Another thing is that you only use song titles in quotations half the time, and never put albums in italics, which is something that makes such an historical and example-laden review really confusing to read and just a bit hard on the eyes.
Other than that this is really well written and I think you're starting to nail a very defined personal style, I'd just focus more on overall tone and direction and sticking to it!
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Album Rating: 5.0
Thanks man I'll make those edits now :]
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https://imgur.com/a/surOMzs
lol
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Album Rating: 5.0
Lol. He posted a ridiculous picture of himself test day on ig. I think it was like a screenshot of a video.
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Album Rating: 5.0
Daz is so fucking good. Have you heard Dogg Food Aiwaz?
Also are you back now?
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Album Rating: 5.0
The 400 years of slavery was a choice thing?
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Album Rating: 5.0
Where was that? I still need to watch his tmz interview (where he said he loves daz afterwards (I think))
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Album Rating: 5.0
Me too lol
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Album Rating: 5.0
Just got another neg for this nice
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Album Rating: 5.0
Hahahahahaha
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Album Rating: 5.0
This is becoming my worst received review. I felt I did really good on this man
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Album Rating: 5.0
Thanks man that means a lot
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Album Rating: 5.0
:]
I know Aiwaz it's just hard
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Album Rating: 5.0
It went from 8/12 to 13/17 ????
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Album Rating: 5.0
It did make my approval go up so that's cool but lol wat
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Album Rating: 5.0
Lol hell yeah
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Album Rating: 5.0
I want to review Master P's The Ghettos Tryin' To Kill Me but I have no ide where to start. Shame cuz it's a top 5 west coast album imo
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glad to see Sput reviving all the old shit I grew up on. ya'll heard of Tha Dogg Pound and Westside Connection, yeah?
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Album Rating: 5.0
Hell yeah man. Dogg Pound are one of my fav groups. Westside Connection has one of the most mouth watering lineups but it actually succeeds in being great.
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Album Rating: 5.0
Yeah I wanna do a review of the Master P album and make it hugeee
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