i'm not entirely sure what you mean by that
but
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Raw as fuck agreed, it hurts
Hope that's Jac diggin' it and feelin' the melancholy vibes and not just being Jac
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sometimes melancholy is you best friend
I predict a 2.5
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TEACH ME JAC WHO ARE YOU
I NEED TO KNOW
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Jac will prob 2.5 Birthdays and Dear I reckon he'd dig this though
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true emo
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so uneek!!!!
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Now predicting a Jac 5 will be disappointed otherwise
get to it
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don't predict anything with jac, he's a separate entity to all of us that we will NEVEER fully understand.
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no we're not
we're the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world
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Can't wait to hear this!
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Sweet review man! And agreed those cliches are disgusting auto neg >.
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Nice reference avon, feel like smothering some french beaches?
thanks mongiman agreed its just disgraceful
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Umm there was more to that comment lol I said your vocabulary is very profound and your grammar is great. You just need to work on shortening your sentences a bit but pos'd
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wrote an english essay on fight club, true detective on sopranos the other week cause m/
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Cool review man, that last paragraph is brilliant. I'd much rather stuff like that than "the D chromatic scale-influenced melody in 12/8 time signature blah blah."
In fact, you should be aiming to write like that in every review. It gives simple text on a screen character, and helps engage the reader in your piece.
There's some repeat word issues that I'm seeing, things like "spinning us heart-wrenching stories of heartbreak" and "his enigmatic nature and the unorthodox nature" and "a statement of art stripped down to its barest form, stripped of any polish, sheen, or gloss."
It may have been your intention to use repetition, but these ones just don't read well, whereas the repetition in the first paragraph ("gone are...") is great.
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@Mongi cheers dude the sentence thing is a work in progress
@avon for real? sounds like one motherfucker of an essay. I get to write about a Floyd song in my English essay so m/ m/ m/
@lloyd thanks man. that repetition you mentioned was unintentional and I can see how that's a negative, I'll work on making that better in later reviews. ♥︎♥︎♥︎
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Sweet review, Row. Your writing has improved from what I can tell. Instrumental albums can be tricky too, especially when they're bare bones. You did very well with it. Pos obvs.
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I love this guy
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Dude what Floyd song?
Yeah the class was "The Crisis of Meaning" so it was all about existentialism and similar philosophical themes and one of the essay questions was use other texts to examine themes from this class and I was like well yeah that beats writing about the freakin' Bible so m/
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