Album Rating: 1.0
2nd paragraph is good rest of review is as bad as this record
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Album Rating: 1.0
no it was me
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Album Rating: 2.0
Dead to the World because it ripped an actual lead from themselves.
Im glad im not the only one to notic just how fucking similar the two are.
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Album Rating: 1.0
didnt listen to it yet
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Album Rating: 1.0
hah, pos'd.
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The band has been putting out bland and uninspired material since their debut release. Pretty sad, considering the fact how promising they were, when the first EP`s came out.
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Album Rating: 1.5
"didnt listen to it yet"
I'd recommend keeping it that way.
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Album Rating: 1.5
"why the fuck did u bother listening to this to begin with swantko?"
Because I am a brave soul and had to warn my fellow sputnikers.
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Are there any worthwhile/fun songs here? I hesitate to listen to the whole thing.
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Album Rating: 1.5
No.
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Album Rating: 1.5
^
Pos'd btw
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Good album but the new All That Remains is better
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Album Rating: 2.0
Good album but the new All That Remains is better
COTY m/ ; ]
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Album Rating: 1.5
lol.
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Album Rating: 2.0
Righto dude, here goes:
Whatever first impressions couldn’t tell you, the music itself does at record pace. In case you thought you may have been hallucinating, yes, they seriously did write a sequel to “Tears Don’t Fall” and yes, there really are songs titled “Livin’ Life on the Edge of a Knife” and “Pow.”
Too many "and" and the track title "P.O.W." should be the same in both mentions. (This helps your review not look like a rant.)
Even the quasi-breakdown is half-assed and uninspired
How?
My wiser side is urging me to halt this review immediately and delete this album from my hard drive.
Hugely conversational. Also, kind of pointless - it's the equivelant of putting "I'm writing this review, when I clearly don't want to" maybe instead extend your previous points of the paragraph and back up your statements.
Temper Temper sounds exactly like their recent records except with even less effort put forth.
Reword, reads choppy and destroys the flow of your review. It's alright to pull out the thesauras but you need it to flow as well. Instead of 'forth' maybe just a simple 'into it' would work.
Further exemplifying their lyrical prowess, or lack thereof
No need for a comma after "prowess"
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Album Rating: 2.0
which poetically proclaims- Temper temper
Spacing: proclaims - Temper....
you be the judge- This feeling’s overwhelming
Spacing; as above.
. Riveting indeed.
Fragment, Extend into something along the lines of: "The lyrical content shows a listen that is riveting indeed."
. In the meantime, we can all share a laugh and toast to real men like Chuck Schuldiner, Dimebag, Peter Steele and all the other metal gods who had balls of iron and metal flowing through their veins. As the saying goes, "you can't appreciate the good without also experiencing the bad."
This name dropping is concerning, it honestly looks like you're bulking out your review with pioneer/successful/etc. artists. Consider removing and writing a closer that backs the entire of your review.
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Album Rating: 1.5
Took care of most of what you mentioned, Ipod. Thanks for the constructive crit; always appreciated.
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Album Rating: 2.0
It's all good man, and you can see it really didn't change that much just polished around the edges.
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Album Rating: 1.5
Yes; learn something new everyday (I can honestly say I didn't realize the difference between word-space-hyphen-space and word-hyphen-space). Haha but I get it now; cheers man.
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Album Rating: 2.0
All good dude.
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