Nice. I think it's pretty much there. Just try to watch out for this kind of stuff next time and maybe you could try to be a little more descriptive in your next review.

Yeah. There's still an example of a comma splice and a fragment, but I'll leave you to your wits to find them. As is, it's not distracting, which is all that matters in a review, really.

I'll go ahead and pos, but you definitely want to mind grammar in your review, and like Ecnalzen said, you'll want some more description as well.

Album Rating: 3.5

cool, thanks guys, i'll take more time doing them next time. i really want to do reviews for albums that haven't got any, the latter 2 of a tribe called quest, R.E.M. and some more---so look out for that

Album Rating: 3.5

some jazz albums too, eric dolphy and more--what’s with the lack of jazz votes on this site.

Album Rating: 4.2

Great album