Album Rating: 4.0

It's not verbatim in terms of wording, but the tone certainly shares, parhaps, a little too much similarity if I can go by that expression.



That's an absolutely fair conclusion to draw; I will even go further and admit that I myself agree and feel that my opening sentence is a bit too close in terms of "vibe" to the P4k original. A bit too close for comfort, perhaps.



For the sake of transparency (and to hopefully indicate that I acted in good faith), I will let on that I have been trying to develop my style of writing for a while now, and part of my efforts include extensive reading of the works of other, much more accomplished writers. In trying to absorb all this material there are times where I do feel like I'm hitting too closely to the source (this isn't the only time it's happened), which is obviously not ideal. That being said, I'm still trying to develop my own style and hopefully one day I'll come away from all of this with a better clarity of thought and the ability to speak in a manner in a way that doesn't seem like I'm simply aping someone else.

Album Rating: 4.0

(I hope this was a satisfactory explanation, taylormemer?)

Well, there's little wrong with being inspired and yearning for better things. I think in this instance it's purely a case of:

1. The wording, which is marginally similar
2. The concept, which is markedly similar
3. The conjunction of the above two points
4. The fact I'm aware of the review that is the source of your influence

But it's not you like have anything to answer for. I was just hoping to make you aware of the fact that it was, as I said, "too close".

Album Rating: 4.0

That's very gracious of you to say that, taylormemer, and I appreciate it greatly =) That being said, I do feel a bit of a pang of guilt each time I look at this piece and am reminded of the work by which it was partially inspired...maybe that's why I went to such great lengths to explain myself.



In any case, lesson learned (or at least, message conveyed). It may have been a rather harsh reminder of some of my greater shortcomings as a writer but you know what, I would have it no other way =) I guess this is all part and parcel of learning and trying to improve.



And for the record: I owe you one mate. I consider this criticism a huge favour from you and won't forget it easily. Thanks.

hella good review. i wasn't too impressed with this on first listen, but my attention wasn't really there either. will give it a few more go's.

god Irv this is like the worst review I've ever read oh my jesus it's just so so bad in every way



But seriously, how aren't you a god damn contributor yet? I'm just gonna congratulate you on the feature now because lord knows its only a matter of a couple hours before it's up there so.... nicely done :]

Album Rating: 4.0

Just rewrote this review for the umpteenth time. I think I'm finally content with it.



Bleargh.

Album Rating: 4.0

i'm glad you got rid of that original last line because i thought it was awful. but the opening paragraph for me is pretty stupid. 'whenever i write about zola...' - well i expect you never write about her, so why say that? the tone for me is wrong, the 'i' that keeps popping up in this review feels awkward.

the rest has good description and analysis, but feels like a series of separate observations that you have melded together. which means there's a lack of flow.

lastly it feels like you're writing to impress people. which is an unfair criticism cos i suppose we all do that. but it feels like you're using expressions and words because they will come across as impressive, rather than because that's what you want to say.

not trying to burst your bubble here and there's no need to agree with me. but since you bother to give other people feedback, i thought i'd give you something to mull over.

Album Rating: 4.0

Thanks for all your comments and criticism mate. You've definitely given me a fair bit to think about. Obviously my writing is still a work in progress, but hopefully I'll be able to produce much more convincing work sooner rather than later.



Thanks again for your time man.

Album Rating: 4.0

Not sure I follow...?

blonde Nika vs black haired Nika

F YEAH

Album Rating: 4.0

*confused*

vessel is soooo deep ! good review.

Album Rating: 4.0

Thank you godblesstool! (best username ever haha)

thank U 2 ;D

Album Rating: 4.0

there's a song called hikikomori





that's awesome, and also makes me feel terrible

Album Rating: 3.0

you should go outside bro it's fun

Album Rating: 4.0

what is she doing on that tree?

Album Rating: 4.0

LOLZ WHAT JUST HAPPENED HERE.

Album Rating: 4.0

lol. i'm almost one, but i'm not as bad as i used to be haha