Cheers Sowing, you really did tear it apart. Then again that's kinda what i asked for. I thought i would use ideas i know everyday readers would understand such as 'chug or triplet' without going over the top with my terms or descriptions. As for the grammar, as much as i try i can't seem to tidy that up but i do understand that its the main problem that holds me back. Also i have taken the advice of some of your fellow contributors and review albums that don't already have reviews but this for the most part provides less feedback.

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, Dimsim? You ask and you receive, this shows you just how helpful some of the contributors can be.

yeah that's the problem with reviewing lesser known stuff, but I think in the end you will find it is worth it

and your grammar has already improved a lot, so i'm sure it's just a matter of time before you get everything going for you in one review

Thanks again Sowing.