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Essence
May 18th 2010


6692 Comments

Album Rating: 1.0

dude it's even more incorrect to start a sentence with the word 'however'...

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


That's just not true. However is a perfectly legitimate way to start a sentence. You're never supposed to separate your subject from your verb.

Waior
May 18th 2010


11778 Comments


I prefer 'it, however, goes' personally

Essence
May 18th 2010


6692 Comments

Album Rating: 1.0

you can't start a sentence with 'however'; i don't remember the specific reason but i think it has something to do with however being more of a 'speech' type word

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Can_you_start_a_sentence_with_the_word_'however'

That rule is ancient and generally considered outdated. It's okay as long as you put a comma after it so that the reader is aware the word is standing in for another similar word (usually 'nevertheless').

Edit: Actually, looking at different sources turns up a lot of conflicting views on that one, but my profs have always said it's pretty much totally acceptable in academic writing these days.

Essence
May 18th 2010


6692 Comments

Album Rating: 1.0

dude you just fucking quoted WIKIPEDIA at me

bungy
May 18th 2010


9009 Comments


Dude 4 3s in a row

bungy
May 18th 2010


9009 Comments


4 of them

Essence
May 18th 2010


6692 Comments

Album Rating: 1.0

I like Busey's contribution, and not just because he's a butthorn.

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


Final suggestion: "This displays the joy and wonder of the vocalist, who clearly takes an interest in the going ons of his planet; however, it goes much deeper."

That is definitely a correct way, even if it isn't the only one, and it reads a lot smoother.

bungy
May 18th 2010


9009 Comments


Youll have to be a long time before you get 4 3s again

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


Btw, I wasn't trying to start a thing in here, I actually thought this review was pretty awesome. Will pos, and I won't check this out.

Edit: sup bungy, hows life?

eggsvonsatan
May 18th 2010


1087 Comments


interesting

bloozclooz
May 18th 2010


1770 Comments

Album Rating: 1.5

dude you just fucking quoted WIKIPEDIA at me




wikipedia > you

Wizard
May 18th 2010


20509 Comments


Using Wikipedia only shows your true retard though!

Essence
May 18th 2010


6692 Comments

Album Rating: 1.0

i'm sorry, i'm pretty sure bloozclooz still fucking isn't anyone

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


Elcxaty.

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


OMG thats so leeeeeeeet.

bloc
May 18th 2010


70024 Comments


LOL

Holy hell that actually is amazing.

sniper
May 18th 2010


19075 Comments


Seriously just become bloozclooz2 and leave it.



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