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mort your haiku has too many tautologies



pls consider replacing two instances of the word 'cum' with stylistically appropriate synonyms



and don't you dare use ai

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i would also suggest medical help if the cum is 'flowing freely'

it should be several powerful bursts, not leaking constantly

nobody understands my art

penis tumescent
tightest bollocks in the game
young and full of cum

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was with you until the last line gives me blue balls

so have you guys ever smoked dmt

my sexual potency frightens the plebs

tautology alert
tautology alert

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for blue balls? dunno if it would help much

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this thread is in shambles, dear god

I’ll take that as a no

dear god, dont know if
you heard, the tautology
is tautology

have you heard the famous one-word haiku falsely attributed to basho?

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mort you have improved considerably but the punchline in the second haiku is lacking



deliver something truly loin quivering next time, I expect great things from you

no i have not

it is this https://steemit.com/haiku/@dbooster/ah-matsushima-haiku-of-japan-68
and yeah less cum more residue plz mortybutt

deliver something
a truly loin quivering
great member that cums

matsushima
aaah! matsushima
matsushima...

^

oooooh kos
or some say
kosm


^


oooooh cum
or some say
cumstain

pyramidal haiku
girthy base, but i want
just the tip


and lmfao yes

a music review
in haiku form for giggles
my brainstem drolly