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Gyromania
Contributing Reviewer
October 12th 2014


38334 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

you're just not going to improve your writing abilities and that's all there is to it. you have a terrible attitude towards writing and you perceive people trying to help you as trolls or overly critical, and all i can glean from your observations is it'd be too devastating to come to terms with the fact that you haven't improved much in 5 years so instead you desperately cling to disbelief. it's a common reaction to have when you realize all that hard work hasn't amounted to much. another win for ignorance

Lord(e)Po)))ts
October 12th 2014


70256 Comments


much suffering itt


Gyromania
Contributing Reviewer
October 12th 2014


38334 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

that profile page froze my browser

CamWJohnson
October 12th 2014


38 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

A lot of them have been running together lately. I need to put more diversities in my schedule. I'm really not proud about certain endeavors, but I do have a fair following of people who have appreciated my work for some time. I always try to find areas in which to improve, but within a unique realm.

Negator
October 12th 2014


1583 Comments


my god

HalcyonMusic
October 12th 2014


85 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Yep.

CamWJohnson
October 12th 2014


38 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

Gyromania

Are you paying any attention at all? I just now started reading the criticisms, and I will try to do something about them. It will be a slow process, but a sure one. Also, I respect the grounded, respectful criticism, but nonsense in the vein of what you're spouting is sheer assault, and it's aggravating, not so much because I take you all that seriously, but because I just don't like buffoonery like this. Now, this is a smart site, and I'm sure you're smart, but whatever the case may be, you're not listening to me.

Gyromania
Contributing Reviewer
October 12th 2014


38334 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

only buffoonery i can spot is your inability to adapt and your undying narcissism

Negator
October 12th 2014


1583 Comments


haha sputnik is a smart site thats a new one hehehe

CamWJohnson
October 12th 2014


38 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

What is your problem, kid? I haven't changed much, because I haven't had to deal with anyone like you in almost five years. Now, here you are, telling me how my mind works, how I should live my life, and how the passion I hold in my life is a lie. This isn't so much cruel as much as it's just plain idiotic, and you have no right to throw these blatant inaccuracies about who I am to me. I am extremely critical of myself, and if I agree with anything you say, I said it long before you.

SharkTooth
October 12th 2014


15014 Comments


I think you should just leave these guys alone, they're obviously wasting your time

Negator
October 12th 2014


1583 Comments


dude the problem with your reviews is you have no consideration for the readers. You just write and write and write and let it all spill out like its gold coming out of your fingertips. When its not. You need to care about the reader. The reader doesnt want to be bombared by walls of text, they dont want to have to dig into your psyche to figure out what youre trying to say. You need to guide the reader into what youre trying to say. You just go all in and never relent. Its a practice of self indulgence.



Lord(e)Po)))ts
October 12th 2014


70256 Comments


how bout dat new slipknot doe

CamWJohnson
October 12th 2014


38 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

I would like to emphasize my total honesty in the following statement...

This community is not what I expected, and I felt that my attempt at a unique and extensive style would be embraced, just as it has been everywhere else, but the overwhelming consensus shows that I am not welcomed. I can change my style only so much before it loses its heart, and I will not completely sell out, but by being a part of a community like this, I could very well be contradicting my direction. I am not proclaiming that I am of a higher intellectual level, but I have backed away from "webenized" communities that come complete with trolls, lowbrow humor, etc., as that's simply not the kind of person I am. For every highbrow comment or criticism, there is a lowbrow comment or criticism, and as big a fan as I am of this site, I feel that I would be better appreciated elsewhere. At any rate, Negator is both right and wrong in his stating that I have no care for my readers, as I do have a particular following that I have appealed to time and time again, but on our own terms. My reviews cannot be obscured or directed towards a particular audience, thus, I am pleasing many, and displeasing many other, which is the last thing that I want to do. I will take some time to ponder, and perhaps see if I can adjust my review style, but if I simply must leave this website, not because of bullying or anything of that sort, but to find a community in which I fit more comfortably, I am out. If anyone does, in fact, appreciate my style, get in touch, and I'll keep you in touch with where you can find me, if I do move.

Asdfp277
October 12th 2014


25665 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

this thread is unbelievable

CamWJohnson
October 12th 2014


38 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

Let me try this one more time. I did get carried away. Perhaps a website that provides my writing to general audiences is not for me right now, as I have never received much criticism, and therefore felt that I hit a solid formula. I need to expand my style for general audiences in the future, and for informing me of this, I find the episode of being involved in this site rewarding. I need to continue having my reviews be more isolated until I can expand my demographic focus. I am hurt by the harsh words, but their meaning is taken to heart, and whether or not I continue to be on this site, I will make changes. Forget half of you, and thanks to the rest of you.

Gyromania
Contributing Reviewer
October 12th 2014


38334 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

< 3

Negator
October 12th 2014


1583 Comments


^there ya go. theres something positive in everything. and this can be said for most things, without error or criticism how do we hope to better ourselves? from a ever learning ever aspiring writer, I wish you best of luck.

Veldin
October 12th 2014


5874 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

Guys, this thread is getting goddamn ridiculous...

Lord(e)Po)))ts
October 12th 2014


70256 Comments


'getting'



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