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Emim
August 14th 2023


38587 Comments


Like Gandalf searching the archives

bloc
August 14th 2023


70880 Comments


Quick, what's the ebonics translation for "Mellon"?

ghostalgeist
August 15th 2023


759 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

yeah this album's pretty bad, agreed

AlexKzillion
Emeritus
August 15th 2023


19068 Comments

Album Rating: 5.0

the track lengths are def part of the charm and i think enhance the album's vibe quite a bit... feels like the auditory equivalent of flipping through a comic book. some pages are way less dense than others.

DocSportello
August 15th 2023


3695 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

love this.album

FearThyEvil
August 15th 2023


19402 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

At least Accordion was put in the highlighted tracks because that is easily my favorite on here.

Ryus
August 15th 2023


37885 Comments


“Thanks for reminding me to 2.5 this (reasons not the same as the review), I just think MF Doom lacks a certain kind charisma that I look for in hip hop, this has never resonated with me in any way, instrumentals are cool I guess, but never done anything for me either, like that J Dilla Donuts album, mid.”

bruh

PotsyTater
August 15th 2023


10099 Comments


I just think tundra lacks a certain kind of sentience I look for in living organisms, he has never resonated with me in any way,

BaselineOOO
August 16th 2023


2846 Comments


Who is Tundra, what is his MO, and why does everyone hate him?

Tundra
August 19th 2023


10753 Comments

Album Rating: 2.0

got no idea who that guy is man

Deez
August 21st 2023


10598 Comments

Album Rating: 5.0



' I just think tundra lacks a certain kind of sentience I look for in living organisms'





Fking lol

BaselineOOO
August 21st 2023


2846 Comments


Thanks for the feedback, MillionDead!

MillionDead
August 21st 2023


6307 Comments

Album Rating: 5.0

Lots of places here where you use like 15 words to do the same work that 5 could. It's hard to vibe with this writing style. It's so needlessly verbose. Fatty, even. Overloaded with commas.



I feel like the best writing is more lean and efficient, more concerned with being succinctly understood than impressing with how many syllables it can fit into a sentence. I feel like your concept of English is thoroughly realized enough that you don't need to rely on looking up definitions so much. Focus on articulating your own ideas in the most natural way that they come to you, first, vs looking up definitions. Then revise/enhance as needed. I'm sure the writing would feel more authentic and less stilted that way.



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