this gon sound lazy but:
I dig the conversational tone but some jokes are just way over the top my man, refine those, polish some grammar (or not, honestly, who cares) and you are dead set for Bitchfork.
Also, if you are going for smth like this, make it shorter, way shorter, like half of this. It'll reach more lazy readers.
But yeah pos'd all in all cause m/
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Album Rating: 3.5
i doooont know which jokes to cut aaaahhhh
and yea the tone and intensity is just a KILL-ism really
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pos from me... nice throwback kill style review
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oh shit i made my comment on the first page, didn't know ya'll were already talking kill
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Album Rating: 3.5
love u spirit
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love u 2 bb
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Album Rating: 3.5
u ever listen to this? its good i swear
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This seems interesting. Gonna grab this one now, are their other albums good too or na?
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Album Rating: 4.0
Havent listened to the others but this one is sick
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the next 3 are all worth hearing.
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Album Rating: 3.5
yea shit rules m/
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Album Rating: 3.5
fuckin PISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSED
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Album Rating: 4.0
damn i should 4.5 this shit
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Album Rating: 3.5
pist
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Album Rating: 4.0
sweet i boosted the avg
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Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off
Nice.
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Album slaps
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Album Rating: 4.0
Yes
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Album Rating: 3.5
ahrd
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This is crazy stuff btw.
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