haha dont really miss fall 2012

Album Rating: 4.5

jusswondering, did this really deserve all the negs?

about time this got reviewed : D

Album Rating: 3.0

i wonder if she likes the hotelier

I absolutely cannot stand her new haircut. Something about it makes me throw up in my mouth.

Album Rating: 4.5

love this so many

this album has consumed my life lately

Beau Bokan, lucky bastard.

Album Rating: 3.5

Siberia is better but this is still pre cool

Album Rating: 4.5

na

"jusswondering, did this really deserve all the negs?"

Yea it isn't a very good review. It is really vague and feels too short just not because of conciseness but rather a lack of knowing what to talk about.

What this review says:
- somewhere between siberia and the listening ( but how? what elements are from each? the only thing you mentioned is lyrics, what aspects are new? How do these aspects mesh together?)

- you like her voice

- the songs are bubblegum pop anthems (ok and how does this justify your rating? Everything you have said in this review could literally be applied to a one direction album and have the same score. Surely they must be incredibly moving to justify a 4.5, what makes them succeed?)

Album Rating: 4.0

its a good album

I'm not going to neg or pos this, but here's some feedback:

1. This review is pretty short. That's not always a bad thing, but if it's going to be short then it needs to be to-the-point. With that being said, the first paragraph could easily be summarized into something like "Canadian electro-pop artist Lights first emerged in 2008 and has since two albums and (however many) EP's. Now,she's back with a third LP that combines the (insert elements here) of _______ and the (insert other elements) of _______." After that, describe how this album sounds and what it's like. Talking about maturation is good, but remember that you're writing a review for Little Machines, not Siberia or any of her other albums. Stick to the point unless you're making detailed comparison, what she's improved in, etc.

2. Don't wait until the last sentence to bring up any flaws. A conclusion should be there to summarize your final thoughts about the album and it shouldn't really bring up any new points that could be elaborated on further.

3. Lines like "It's hard to describe but it just makes me smile" should never be included in reviews. Either try to describe it or leave that part out and replace lines like "it just makes me smile" with "it works really effectively". It sounds way more professional and not so cheesy.

Hope this helps, there's definitely potential here.

Album Rating: 5.0

Album is a guilty pleasure. It's really good.

you seriously can't expect me to be able to wait a whole nother day to buy lights tickets

about to see her with ym girl in a week

Album Rating: 5.0

from all sides is so good. so is oil and water

nice have fun! her shows are seriously top-notch, worth every penny. i love damn well everything you 5'd btw

Her first name is actually now lights, deal with it

Album Rating: 5.0 | Sound Off

This album flows seamlessly, especially with the bonus tracks.