"...full of energy just like their predeceasing outputs."
I highly doubt you mean that their other albums died before this one did.
"...the newest inclusion here is the inclusion of keyboards."
I think there might be a more concise way to put this; like maybe not using the word "inclusion" twice in a five word span...
The good news is that you're quickly becoming the world's best troll without even trying, which is a huge accomplishment.
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