There's some really awkward phrasing here, partially due to your punctuation.

To describe Domain’s sound; it could be considered a blend of over used breakdowns, raspy and growled vocal lines, relentless drum work and recycled guitar riffs and chord ideas and passages

Granted each member knows what they are doing with their respective instruments, but the lack of creativity throughout the album ensures a dull listen

I like your writing (and I'm obviously no expert myself) so I'll pos, but you do seem to stumble sometimes in your review.

I understand this, it's something i'm working on. (I'm not sure whether you have some of my other reviews) It's something i have progressed on review to review. Much thanks to the contribs that float through the site and are happy to help.

although this may be due to a difference in being taught grammar

I really only have a basic schooling in grammar, and most of the correct stylings that should be used have been strangled by my music aural training.

Thanks for the look over. : ]

Cheers man. Glad you liked it, ill take that on board. : ]

Tried again, still no joy in this one.

Album Rating: 3.0

Don't care what anyone says, might be boring and generic as hell. But the vocalist is unique as shit, never heard anyone like him. He actually sounds demonic!

Sorry red rose, still a resounding 'meh'

Ipod!

Yes ?

Long time no see.

Mate, i float around the site Monday's and Tuesday's (Aust time) the rest of the week i'm 10 hours a day working my ass off. : ]

Good man. I see you don't like this too much. Haha. Anyways put up a review soon!

Watch this space mate, I'm editing and proof reading.

Nice

Unless, the site crashes.

True

Album Rating: 2.5

His highs on this album are so annoying, yet on Proprioception they're just so good.

I couldn't disagree more actually, there needs to be some serious work here all round. The vocals would be a good place to start but don't stop there.