great avatar Dizchu

lol

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

Who keeps negging my stuff...?

Show yerself and tell me what's wrong. Maybe I could learn how to improve my writing.

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

Also:

such a perfect album for a sunny February day!

Album Rating: 3.0

Nice review Garas, not going to lie, the summary drew me in.

Album Rating: 3.0

I pos'd personally, but without answering for those absent neggers I wouldn't mind a little more detail here and there (although I see your style here is more of a "yay, look at this" rather than the full thousand word run down of "why I gave this album X out of 5).



As with high scoring (and low) there's some hyperbolic phrases that seep through:



The album's opener, "The Clearing", makes this all clear at very beginning (pun intended).



How does this become clear? Wordplay or no, this needs more. Adding to this is:





The album welcomes the listener with a "suspiciously" uplifting vibe through neo-medieval elements,



It's best to assume your reader has no prior knowledge of what you're talking about. Sometimes you have to spell it out for them. How is is suspicious? Or better yet, expand on the uplifting neo-med elements and their positive vibes.



Some of the guys here don't like conjunctions as starters so much, for eg:



And I mean it:



You could get away with "I mean it:", and still keep that conversational tone.



idyll



Do we mean this in the happy, fairy-time sense or should this be "idle"?



I'm going to leave it at that, hopefully some (even a little bit) of this helps.

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

Thanks Nocte, I really appreciate it! 🤍

I might do a few changes following your comments.

Album Rating: 3.0

All good. I'd take more away from the "feature" than the "vote count" if I were you. I don't remember reading too many of your write-ups - but with this little ditty in mind I'll do more than keep an eye out. Keep up the good work.

that's a boring bm album cover if i've ever seen one

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

Hell yeah. Checking asap

Album Rating: 4.0

Yeah someone, and that's not even a natural forest

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

This is a really pleasant listen so far.

sounds right up my street

Album Rating: 4.0

btw

"It's best to assume your reader has no prior knowledge of what you're talking about"



Confirmed, the most important thing I learned at Uni.



This is a damn good album. I wish it was more focused tho, how am I ever going to get familiar with both this and the new Ad Nauseam? There be not enough hours in the day.

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

Fair, but I like adventures: "go and find out on your own!" :]



And the struggle is real - even though I really having longer releases... better get ready for the new Paysage too.

Album Rating: 4.0

Already? But I only heard Im Wald like 3 times ):

Album Rating: 4.0

yeah this is gonna be like the paysage album from last year for me. It's too long for constant rotation, but i will put it on every few weeks or so and have a blast each time

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

yeah, I'm digging da hell jamming this. It is also very nature uplifting bm.

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

I feel this one will have one less 4 and 1 4.5 more soon enough XD

Nol (USA)