Some little edits if you'd like:
-- "Vocal" should be pluralised at the start of the second paragraph, I think.
-- " the singing on this album"
-- "Aseul sings her [or the] catchiest hooks over funktastic melodies."
-- the word "replay" is a tad awkward in the second para; I'd use something like "callback", or even "reference"
-- "Or maybe we easily forgot things that were actually important to us."
Otherwise nice work!! Awkward phrasing here and there, but overall it reads super well. Love all the images you draw.
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Album Rating: 3.5
I love you blush. I really appreciate your feedback
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Album Rating: 3.4 | Sound Off
Very comfy album
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Album Rating: 3.5
gonna listen to this soon probably, is it better than Jida?
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blush is the best ever yea
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Album Rating: 3.5
Idk who Jida is lol
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Album Rating: 3.5
gonna listen to this s o o n
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Album Rating: 3.5
and abe listen to jida, it's v you
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Album Rating: 3.5
soon™
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Album Rating: 3.5
good my bloody valentine song, you should check it!
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Album Rating: 3.5
I have listened to this.
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Album Rating: 3.4 | Sound Off
And I'm glad you did.
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Album Rating: 5.0
its a good!
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Album Rating: 3.5
It's a respond!!
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Album Rating: 3.4 | Sound Off
best new music woah
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Album Rating: 4.0
Great review
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this is ok! wish i didn't have to associate every japanese or korean pop artist with johnny tho. leave these poor girls alone! you can't hear them all!
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Album Rating: 3.5
Well, he's a staff (now) who proudly wears the fetish of Asianese music so there's that. You might want to check Yukari - Echo tho, it's her previous alias which I think more suitable to your taste.
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Aight b
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Album Rating: 5.0
This is my favorite new album of 2020.
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