Ok I looked at the link Scream posted and some were pretty funny I will admit. At least I understand what's happening in this thread now lol.
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Album Rating: 2.5
just downloaded all his stuff. actually really laid back intelligent stuff if you are open-minded and give it a chance
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oh ya super intelligent
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Can I get criticism on this review? I want to know what about it was poorly written so I can do better.
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I don't see how that's a problem when I've seen staff reviews shorter than mine. Actual criticism would be helpful though.
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You mentioned it's "everything you could want in a hip-hop album" and that it was one of the best mixtapes of the year, but you didn't elaborate on either of those points. What is it exactly that I would want in a hip-hop album that makes this different or interesting? What makes this one of the best of the year other than the fact that it should suck, but doesn't? Sure there may be short staff reviews, but they utilize every bit of the review to talk about the music. This review is too short to really say anything about the album, especially since the first (already short) paragraph is about his father's rap career and how we all expected it to be bad.
In other words, you wrote a two paragraph review. That's why it's poorly written.
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Sure there may be short staff reviews, but they utilize every bit of the review to talk about the music.
ehhh
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It's actually not that bad...
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Album Rating: 1.0
Liked his acting in pursiut of hapiness, despise this with burning passion
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I was going to try this earlier, then I went and jammed lloyd banks
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the lyrics are god awful in content, the production is boring as shit and his rapping is entirely stolen but yeah it's all done at a way higher level than anyone would have expected so i guess that's something
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I'm no parent, I couldn't look after sea monkeys, but maybe will smith should find his kiddies alternative hobbies... Maybe build a nice tree house, maybe some more video games, I dunno what kids do nowadays, but not "whip ma head back n fourth" and this dribble
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just bought a cadillac
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ya fair point
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@treeqt. Okay, maybe not the entire thing, but enough to get a halfway cohesive thought or idea about the album communicated.
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Will Smith is a great rapper, actually.
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this is still good tho
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Jaden Smith Awesome Tape Great Job!
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shiiiiit his new track bangs
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