"people don't usually bother to develop in-depth constructive criticism if they think it'll fall on deaf
ears. you haven't displayed much genuine desire to improve, so idk why you're surprised people aren't
going out of their way to help your writing."

I'm perfectly willing to improve, but I don't see "review is bad" as helpful. Also, I was extremely
negative in this one because I simply cannot write positive reviews, especially if it's an album that I
love to begin with.

Thanks for the advice, though.

"Why should I care about high schools and teenage girls and whether or not young people are listening to
older metal bands? These are not relevant at all to the music itself and shouldn't be a basis of
critiquing the band."

Because the music is not the point of the album. The music sucks, but look anywhere outside of sputnik and
most people went nuts over assumed 'quality' of the album itself. Lots of imaging, not music music
writing.

Album Rating: 2.5

Good review

Album Rating: 1.5 | Sound Off

Review could use a lot of work, mainly in taking out a lot of your strong feelings about the band/fans and focusing more on the music. I agree with most of what you said and a lot of this was relatively well written, so I won't pos or neg.

"rant less" is what I'm getting from this

Album Rating: 2.5

"feel like they're written by an angry 13 year old"



Kinda like this review.



Are you reviewing the album or people you don't like?



All of the Metallica comparisons are unnecessary and the whole review itself comes off extremely unprofessional with the large amount of swearing and massive, immature generalizations.



Try again, and yes: "rant less".

Get better writing please

Nvm, good review

hmm reviewing people, i like this idea

Album Rating: 1.5

Is this seriously the only good comment in the whole thread?

this review's is like that time i heard that one album that was really bad xD

Album Rating: 3.2

Because the music is not the point of the album.

"Is this seriously the only good comment in the whole thread?


did you even fucking read the part where i picked apart the first 2/3 of the review

stop being a lazy doorstop and improve your writing if you're wondering why you are getting so much negative feedback for a review that you don't understand

and for the record, i basically did deviant's work for him before he could pick the thing apart, that's what he usually does"

it was pretty much a given that I liked your comment, I forgot to mention it.

Definitely going to rewrite the review.

Yikes this is a terrible review. The dude who wrote this is around 16 years of age I'm guessing? You need to get rid of all the childish sentences and immature ranting. Then again, that's pretty much the whole review so just go read blabbermouth or something.

Album Rating: 2.0

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORING