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Supercoolguy64
August 25th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

your gonna really dig it with your tastes

Atari
Staff Reviewer
August 26th 2014


27975 Comments


good review man

I read this as well as your latest review and they're both really well-written. The only advice I have at this point is try to be careful about how often you use the word "I". Sometimes it's necessary, especially in a more personal review, but the last paragraph of this review has the word several times and would probably read better if it was worded differently. I know it's hard to never refer to yourself in a review, but as a general rule of thumb, the less you use the word "I" the better. That way your reviews will feel more objective and less biased. Other than that tip, keep up the good work!

Jots
Emeritus
August 26th 2014


7562 Comments

Album Rating: 3.8

Thanks man. I actually wanted this to be fairly subjective in parts, but I'll edit and tone it down a bit

Atari
Staff Reviewer
August 26th 2014


27975 Comments


no need to edit it if that's what you were going for man. That advice is mostly to keep in mind for future reviews

Supercoolguy64
August 26th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Future of what reviews?

Gyromania
August 26th 2014


37121 Comments


excellent review. it seems as though you're applying all of the constructive feedback to your writing. i just read your last 7 reviews and they've (mostly) gotten progressively better

Supercoolguy64
October 4th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

HERE COMES THE DOGS

Ryus
October 4th 2014


36930 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

only unwound i havent jammed

BMDrummer
October 4th 2014


15111 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

it's a good one

Supercoolguy64
October 4th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

swan is amazing.

BMDrummer
October 4th 2014


15111 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

yeah one of their best

Jots
Emeritus
October 4th 2014


7562 Comments

Album Rating: 3.8

yeah criminally overlooked

BMDrummer
October 4th 2014


15111 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

like unwound itself

Ryus
October 4th 2014


36930 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

repetition>fake train>new plastic ideas>civilizations>s/t>leaves

Supercoolguy64
October 4th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

do you really want to murder me?

is it something that the plot conceals?

BMDrummer
October 4th 2014


15111 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

ryus try leaves a few times and see if it grows

Supercoolguy64
October 4th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

new plastic ideas>fake train imo

Ryus
October 4th 2014


36930 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

listening to it right now and nothing is really changing :/

BMDrummer
October 4th 2014


15111 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

they're about equal for me

Supercoolguy64
October 4th 2014


11792 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

sure, fake train has the valintine card/katrina/ were, are and was or is trilogy

but NPI has friction fiction



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