Adebisi Shank This is the Third Album
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TheSupernatural
August 13th 2014


2249 Comments


Electronic elements? Shit, McManus gonna be pissed.

Jots
Emeritus
August 13th 2014


7632 Comments


Oh, yak you silly goose

HighandDriving
August 13th 2014


3288 Comments


Do you guys rememba when this band was good and released dope math rock tracks like Jump Cut?

No ofc you guys don't lol

Snake.
August 13th 2014


25598 Comments


judging by that album cover they sound like a nonpoint cover band

Jots
Emeritus
August 13th 2014


7632 Comments


Yeah album cover is bunk

anarchistfish
August 13th 2014


30532 Comments


summary is painful to read tbh

gocsa666
August 13th 2014


502 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

It's great but yeah, the first and second were better.

gocsa666
August 13th 2014


502 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

But I still do love the hell out of their commitment to staying instrumental. Even Intervals got themselves a vocalist last year - sadly.

Jots
Emeritus
August 13th 2014


7632 Comments


@fish - yeah, originally I put "this is a review of an album..." but went with something slightly less lame... still no good at summaries tbh

aircycle
August 13th 2014


1103 Comments


i like big unit and voodoo vision quite a bit but i didn't like the rest of this as much as i hoped i would :/

InfamousGrouse
August 13th 2014


4381 Comments


I loathe this band.

Jots
Emeritus
August 13th 2014


7632 Comments


*love
Ftfy

Slut
August 13th 2014


4255 Comments


Want to jam this so bad

Evenoss
August 14th 2014


347 Comments


Big Unit is my favorite. Rest is meh.

TheSupernatural
August 14th 2014


2249 Comments


Summaries are the best part about writing reviews

Jots
Emeritus
August 14th 2014


7632 Comments


meh. couldn't think of anything witty

dawija1017
August 15th 2014


716 Comments


This feels like a band that hipsters would brag about

Jots
Emeritus
August 15th 2014


7632 Comments


@dawija - how so?

cryptside
August 16th 2014


2410 Comments


After reading through this again in a more thorough manner, I can't find too much to criticize. It
is a really great read, and you have the mechanics of writing a review down quite well. There are a
few times where you use commas to try to stuff all of your thoughts into one sentence and it reads a
bit awkward, but that is just a stylistic preference for me. I will give you a few examples:

"While some listeners can appreciate the experimental aspect, and laud the band for being openminded
in their approach, fans of older material can feel isolated, as though elements that made the band
worthwhile were being cast aside in favour of something more commercialized."
-You could remove the comma after 'aspect' and remove the one after 'isolated' as well, it reads
more naturally without those two commas.

""Sensation" is also a highlight for the bassist, and is undeniably funky."
-This doesn't need a comma at all, you can omit this one.

There are some other instances in which you insert unnecessary pauses but I can say that is
something that I still have trouble with in my own writing. You're definitely one the strongest user
writers already, and that's saying something. Nice work man.

AnimalsAsSummit
August 16th 2014


6198 Comments


gotta check this out. album art is a lol



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