Album Rating: 3.0
you probably want to read this review again and avoid all the repetitions. Some examples:
"nger than three and half. Vanna, in an apparent ATTEMPT to emulate bands such as Norma Jean or Botch, ATTEMPT to
create ‘chaotic’ music, an ATTEMPT that falls flat on its face." 3 times in one sentence is a little too much.
"Despite their short length, songs are repetitive and bland, often repeating a riff multiple times. “The Lost Art of Staying
Alive” is a testament to this; the riff is subtly introduced in “The Few and the Far Between” before continuing into the
intro of The Lost Art Of Staying Alive, well overstaying its welcome" here again, you said "repetitive" already, you don't
need to say "often repeating a riff" we already got the idea. Also avoid always using the song's name by changing it
with "the following song", "the next song" and so on...
These are just two examples of the many repetitions that are found in your review. Don't get offended I'm just trying to
help you improve and become a stronger writer
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Album Rating: 3.5
I like the album. Definitely better than ATCBB.
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Listening to it now, i'm liking it way more than their last album. I'll have my rating later, but so far i'm digging it. Good review btw. Let's find out if I agree because so far I don't haha 
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Album Rating: 2.5
@sputniksweetheart lol why would i be offended at someone who is trying to make me a better writer? i'd only be offended if you negged for those reasons lol. But i see where you're coming from, but when i write i like to use a lot of repetition and parallel structures. i find it easier to read that way. Bu tit might come off as awkward sometimes. i'll look into it
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This is so damn bad
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Album Rating: 2.5
Thats who I was guessing haha He's actually a pretty nice guy, shit probably just got to him or somthing
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Album Rating: 1.5
vanna without evan lmfao what a joke
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Album Rating: 1.5
yeah greek potheads rule
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Album Rating: 1.5
greek
potheads
rule
are you retarded?
its only 3 words that you needed to comprehend
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Album Rating: 1.5
you managed to process it that time?
congrats
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Album Rating: 1.5
been listening to veil of maya, thats where all my anger comes from
so hardcore
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Album Rating: 1.5
so do you according to your dig
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Album Rating: 1.5
lmfao @ edit
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Album Rating: 1.5
dude relax youre 33 years old
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Album Rating: 1.5
youre old that means i have issues
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Album Rating: 1.5
logic 101
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Album Rating: 1.5
i sit around and think about it
yeah
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Album Rating: 1.5
"gave away" lol
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Album Rating: 1.5
damn i was trying so hard to gain your approval too : (
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Album Rating: 1.5
oh wait u actually think i care what u think?
shame
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