Actually this album sounds very different than anything they've done before. And I've been a huge critic of their repetitiveness in the past.

Album Rating: 3.5

first three songs are really gud and it drops off from there

3.5 sounds like a high rating if you only like 3 songs

Album Rating: 3.5

you're right

Album Rating: 4.0

"these ratings are getting ridiculous"

it's only ridiculous if you give a fuck how other people are rating albums



Anyways AF gave some great points about the review. I'd just reiterate that the structure of your review is enough to make me not want to read it. Without reading a word, I knew you'd have scattered thoughts and choppy transitions just based on it, and indeed this ended up being true.



So yeah, the biggest thing I'd do is structure your reviews better. You jump from Point A to B to C... to Z, which is an issue since you shouldn't even get to Point Z (you should get to like Point C), and there's no flow. Just think of it as a typical school essay, and try to come up with your topics (whatever they may be), and then see if you can set your points into the appropriate topic's paragraph.