Havey's here to fuck shit up

Album Rating: 2.5

havey is pist-off with me :[

Just didn't click on this review expecting to see Paperback telling 16-year-olds about his preferences regarding threesomes

That's all.

Album Rating: 3.5

@Havey

lol Gian brought up his passion for BDSM, so I thought I'd amuse him with something stupid. I'm not that funny of person honestly, so it just came out weird I guess.

Yeah that was abnormal behavior for someone like Paperback

Album Rating: 3.5

I got some pretty good news today so I've been kind of hyper and joking around, which occasionally makes me say weird things.

Album Rating: 2.5

yeh i'm kinda surprised too, i mean, i'm a weird and obnoxious commenter so ppl ignore me all the time but paperback is like... paperback. bsdm isn't a passion tho i just prefer light bsdm to standard stuff hehe. he.. ha.. uh.



havey is not pist-off with me :]

lol paper I get that you were just being a silly billy and that you don't actually love getting your testicles tasered

s'all good

If you're 16, shouldn't you be focusing more on when the next Amazing World of Gumball episode comes out than bondage games?

gian is a very transcendental 16-year-old, no time for cartoonz n shit gotta live up to the vision of RUSSOLO

Album Rating: 2.5

very transcendental post havey thank u

I got some pretty good news today

cool

Album Rating: 2.5

lmfao paperback better order a ritualistical time machine like this 1 http://folktek.blogspot.com/2012/08/the-impossible-box-official-post.html (also features a Ω masivv modular synth for 72 hours+ electro-acoustic improvisations) or nothin can save you noww

Album Rating: 3.5

@Havey

No, haha. I'm back home and I ran into a girl I dated in high school, and apparently she's interested in getting back together. We'll see how that plays out.

Album Rating: 3.5

@Gian

I'd love to play one of those, but I wouldnt even know what to do. I'll stick with my guitar and bass.

100 REVIEWS OMG CONGRATS

WILL READ IN A MINUTE BRB LIGHTING FIREWORKS

hey Hernan! =]

I remember you saying you wanted more constructive feedback, so i'm going to look through your review.

here are a few things for you:

"Volcanic Queen's eponymously named debut, Volcanic Queen"

You can drop the album title here, to avoid redundancy.

"It's very easy to lose yourself in it's calmative aura, it practically coaxes the listener to close their eyes and sit-back to indulge themselves in hypnotic tranquility."

Its*, and this is a run-on. Either make the comma after 'aura' a period or colon. Also also, sit back is two words!

"A lot of the ambient tracks tend to solely rely on a continuum of aerial textures for sustenance"

You can typically take words like 'tend' out of reviews, because they actually make your statements weaker most of the time. This goes for all types of qualifiers, and here's another example below.

""White Roses Crumbled Underneath the Upper Hand" can actually perhaps be considered the most accessible piece on the album"

If you just said the song IS the most accessible piece on the album, your sentence would be much more self-assured, and ultimately successful.

Overall, very good work as always. your ways of analysing music have become more understandable, and it's a pleasure to watch you grow as a writer.

100 reviews in a little less than a year, wow good work

Album Rating: 3.5

@Omaha

Thanks, Jacob. I did say that, and I appreciate the tips.



@Trebor

Thanks. Good luck in the contributor selections, man.