"Dude, no offence, but I wrote better reviews than this when I was 11. And by better, I mean better structure, spelling, grammar, punctuation and cohesion."

Lol. Spunik user's top 3 favorite words

1. Cohesion/Cohesive
2. Monotonous
3. Generic

they think these terms make them sound intelligent, especially to those who do not speak english very well

spunik users= wannabe music journalist

PS You sound like an idiot when you begin your sentence about your "grammatical abilities" with the word "dude"

Album Rating: 1.5

Well cohesion is a relevant word to use, don't see how it makes Deviant a "wannabe music journalist"

I don't see any problem with those three words at all but maybe they count as advanced English for you?

And for "spunik users= wannabe music journalist" don't you count in the sputnik user group as well? Particularly since you have three reviews yourself.

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

Well, I wrote it again and I think a did a slightly better job here. English is not my first language but I tried to write a review not as a journalist or some musical expert, but as a music fan.



Still, i would like to read the opinions of those who found my previous review bad.

I think I did a better job here.

Thanks.