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RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


D12 World can get beaten to death with a very rusty screwdriver.

Deviant.
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June 6th 2011


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I wonder if you will respond to my query

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


The first sentence? I wrote it comparing mainstream rap (like Recovery) to underground rap (like this) and 90's rap.

Deviant.
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June 6th 2011


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No, what you wrote was that the origin of hip hop took place in the 90's

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


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This isn't underground either

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


There's an underground style of rapping popping up here and there in certain verses. And you're supposed to say: What the hell is up with that first PARAGRAPH, not the first sentence.

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


32288 Comments


No, I'm not. I'm supposed to do nothing. But what I'm telling you is that your first sentence is wrong on every level

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


Note taken.

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


But what you are supposed to do is back up a valid argument, because it's not the first sentence, it's how the rest of the paragraph flows.

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


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This has nothing to do with flow. I'm telling you that your first sentence is wrong, because the origins of hip hop weren't formed in the 90's.

Is any of this getting through?
Do I need to draw you a diagram?


RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


Who said they were formed in the 90's? The point of the sentence is that hip hop began to increase in popularity during that time.

But remind me again WHY we're having this argument?

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


32288 Comments



Who said they were formed in the 90's?


YOU did, in the first sentence of your review

I didn't know brick walls could type

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


I didn't know brick walls could type

You called me a brick wall. Seriously?

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


32288 Comments


unequivocally

wyankeif1337
June 6th 2011


6739 Comments


who the fuck are you and why are you commenting so much all of a sudden?

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


There's a lot to talk about, Wyan.

I tried to contribute to the Diamond Head thread (the plan was to get it to 50 pages), but to no such luck. And if you want to know who I am, look at my profile.

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


32288 Comments


Are you actually aware of the criticism I'm making or are you actually this oblivious?

wyankeif1337
June 6th 2011


6739 Comments


sorry, it just looked like you were going for this http://moaropeth.tumblr.com/tagged/conquering_sputnik for a minute there. i apologize.

RavenRock
June 6th 2011


688 Comments


Quite frankly I am. I made the bad mistake of typing the first sentence / paragraph very badly, therefore making it seem like I said hip-hop began in the 90's, and you're noting this mistake to me quite well.

Are we done here?

Deviant.
Staff Reviewer
June 6th 2011


32288 Comments


Yes, finally



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