Album Rating: 4.0
This bit is a little bit difficult to read. I think you mean "abstract" rather than "general" (as opposed to "concrete", yeah?) and the phrase "outside relationships" is confusing following "within" because "outside" seems at first a preposition rather than part of the noun phrase. "External relationships" might work better?
That all sounds good to me. I try and get the exact wording I'm looking for but it doesn't come out right all the time. I can't change impossible in the first line because it's a lyrical quote. And I've been taught that keeping a central theme is important, so I try to emphasize on it. Thanks for the criticism.
I wish I could write a short review like this. I actually prefer them, and honestly, this was really well done, a joy to read, even though I was sick of reading reviews for this months ago.
A lot of times I see a long review and skip it going right to the comments. And that comes to mind when I write; I can't get through it nobody else is going to read it either.
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Yah I didn't mean the first line, I meant the second. Like I said, everything I wrote about the first paragraph was shit I would've done. By no means implies you should've done it, or even that it's good!
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fantastic review right here.
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Album Rating: 4.0
I love reviews that are shorter, but still get the point across just as well as a 7 paragraph long one. Good job man.
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i wish i could be like you, and most the staff with this
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Album Rating: 2.0
I always forget how good of a reviewer you actually are. Well done.
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fantastic review. one qualm though:
"and tempo changes that shift the reader into the journey through Steven’s mind"
did you mean to use the word 'reader' there? Maybe I'm just not following the metaphor or something but I thought 'listener' or 'audience' or something would be better in there. it's really your call though.
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Album Rating: 4.0
lol nice catch. thanks everybody.
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Album Rating: 3.0
Most of this is so boring, but some of it is beyond brilliant. Frustrating.
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Album Rating: 4.0
There's three duds: I Walked, Now That I'm Older, and Bad Communication. The rest is great.
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Album Rating: 3.0
I think there's four brilliant tracks. The first three and Vesuveus. Age of Adz (the song) is especially amazing.
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Album Rating: 4.0
"Impossible Soul" is my favorite, followed by "Get Real Get Right", then "Futile Devices".
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Album Rating: 4.0
Vesuvius, oh be kind / it hasn't occurred, no it hasn't been said.
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Album Rating: 4.0
I like Impossible Soul just because it's so overblown
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Album Rating: 2.0
I hear ya
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Album Rating: 5.0
I'm not fucking around.
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Album Rating: 5.0
better than the Lakes review agreed
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Album Rating: 5.0
i wish i could be like you, and most the staff with this
and THAT was two years ago
I should be a GOD here
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Beautifully described and still concise.
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Love this album
I especially love the sonic the hedgehog sound effect in the title track.
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