Album Rating: 4.5
"Pretty bad argument
First of all, you say it's bad but you don't even say why it is bad, criticising something without explaining the reason is stupid, as I'm shure you know.
And secondly, I'm not a native speaker so my english is not 100% accurate, and this is the first time i write something here.
I´m not saying I don't accept negative feedback. I do, seriously, as long as it is constructive."
ok,
your grammar is bad.
the flow is kind of awkward, you spend most of the review talking about the first two songs.
overall, you just need to go into more detail and have a better concept for the review before you start writing
I didn't know you weren't a native english speaker. good effort, your writing just needs some work.
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