it's not reviews that ruin albums it's you
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Album Rating: 4.5
what do you think of the review rasputin, your criticism always seems really spot on
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Album Rating: 4.0
Cascadian Black Metal is a really stupid term.
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Album Rating: 4.5
nothing i can do about it :/
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what do you think of the review rasputin, your criticism always seems really spot on
what has already been said sums it up, there is a shitload of awkward sentences and run-ons throughout the whole thing, even in the first paragraph. other than that it's all good.
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Album Rating: 4.5
yeah you would like this chambered
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Album Rating: 4.6
About time someone reviewed this. I prefer Ash Borer to Fell Voices, but both bands are really good.
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Album Rating: 4.5
On this split I enjoy Ash Borer more but overall I'm a bigger fan of Fell Voices.
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Album Rating: 4.6
Well both are really good. I've always just preferred Ash Borer.
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I'm back for a second reading! And what a read it was =)
Great job mate. Always a pleasure to see a writer listen to criticism, and then respond by going back to the drawing board, then turn in a stunning review. That's the kind of stuff that we need more of here on this site.
Have a well-deserved pos.
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Album Rating: 3.5
Another quick look over
Although both bands have been around since 2008, it wasn't truly until their touring session that took place earlier this year that Ash Borer and Fell Voices finally earned widespread appreciation.
I'd word it like "Although both Ash Borer and Fell Voices have been around since 2008, they didn't earn widespread appreciation until their tours earlier this year."
California's Fell Voices's close association with the Cascadian black
California's Fell Voices' close association
Cascadian Region's
Region's should not be capitalized here.
two fantastic tracks, Ash Borer and Fell Voices's joint effort
Ash Borer and Fell Voices' joint effort
In one fell swoop, Ash Borer's sole. untitled track
Should be a comma instead of a period.
instead creating a single, complex , track.
The second comma should be deleted.
many elements over it's length
Many elements over its length
black metal inspired melodies, amongst riffs imbued with both, unbridled, aggression and skilfully executed dissonance.
Really awkward sentence, the period after melodies shouldn't be there, and I'm not sure why unbridled is there and what you were trying to do with it.... I think you meant "black metal inspired melodies amongst riffs imbued with both unbridled aggression and skillfully executed dissonance."
melodic drone infused black metal
melodic drone-infused black metal
deliver the very best drone influenced black metal
Same thing as before.
to their advantage, Fell Voices ability to write music
to their advantage, Fell Voices' ability to write music
Using repetition to their advantage, Fell Voices ability to write music that is played over an achingly long period of time but still somehow remains interesting and relevant throughout, has evolved even further from the skill they displayed on their last album.
I think you could word this a lot simpler.
stands as irrefutable proof to their immense talents each of these bands possess.
I would word it as "stands as irrefutable proof of the immense talent these bands possess."
just enough in common to perfectly accompany each other comfortably
Choose either perfectly or comfortably, you don't need both.
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Album Rating: 3.5
Sorry for the long-winded comment but you asked for another proof-read haha
Always a pleasure to see a writer listen to criticism, and then respond by going back to the drawing board, then turn in a stunning review. That's the kind of stuff that we need more of here on this site.
Definitely agree with this, well said.
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awesome album
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Asher Borer's 09 Demo is really really good so I'll probably look into this even though I don't like splits
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don't like splits?! why the hell not?
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omg
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Hahaha, wow Kyle - points for detailed analysis of the review! Now I want you to look over mine the next time I pump a review out, haha!
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Album Rating: 3.5
Hahaha always happy to help
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That's the kind of stuff that we need more of here on this site.
And I shamelessly quote myself again XD
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Album Rating: 4.5
Thanks Irving it's appreciated. Kyle I'll edit that stuff now, I'm not quite sure why I keep missing stuff everytime I edit this, but thanks for pointing all that stuff out.
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