Album Rating: 4.5

Okay, definitely a lot better. It's not too long, you cut back on the hyperbole, and you went for a more overall approach. Now, you just need to combine paragraphs. The first two can be combined for the intro, then the two after that both contain similar ideas and can be combined, etc

Thanks foreverendeared, you've been a great help. Thanks to others who read this.

@wyankief - Can a review really be deemed unecessary? Especially considering every individual person has their own spin on it. Still, I respect your opinion, there are plenty of other reviews on this site that outshine this but I felt I wanted to have a crack at it myself I guess!