Why thank you, Thane! I will make sure that I keep at it, and maintain the same level of quality.

Album Rating: 3.0

first paragraph: "who's" should be "whose", js

Thanks for the fresh eyes. Will fix immediately.

Album Rating: 4.0

Great review. Fucking love this album, almost as good as We Are the Romans.

Justjoe finally getting what he deserves

NeroCorleone80: Thanks for reading! It's been too long since I've listened to "We Are The Romans". Writing this review has me in a Botch-like mood, so I'm sure I'll give it a spin sometime this week.

Heysatan: That sounds so ominous... I like! =]

Album Rating: 4.5

This is definitely their most accessible album. Good review, I pos'd.

I'll have to return to their second album to clarify, but I think "American Nervoso" has some of my favorite Botch moments. Thanks for reading, Maniac!

Great review joe. pos'd.

some things that you could change to make it better, but i lost the criticisms when compy BSOD'd. will post later though

good job

Always good to hear from you, Bully!

I'll await your critiques, and see if I can't make this review even better.

"and prelude to the innovation of an entire genre."

should be "and a prelude"

"Admittedly, Dave Knudson's guitar playing on this album is nothing short of inspiring."

take out the "admittedly". this is a positive review, so why would you be mildly hesitant (as the use of your word suggests) to talk about how great the guitar playing is?

"over/around/through this auditory spine"

change this to "over, around, and through this auditory spine". makes an already great sentence flow even better.

"the album is disjointed in purest sense of the word"

should be "in the purest sense of the word"

Proofreading applied. Great eyes, Bulldog.

Thanks again, for all the help. =]

No problem dawg, once again good review dude.

Growing up so fast =']

='D

I'm going to try and keep at it, but I want to make sure I keep putting myself outside of my comfort zone genre-wise, because it seems to make my writing more focused.

I agree, silentpotato. Also, review sucks. Too many adjectives. Word prostitution does NOT equal
intellectual aptitude.

I'm listening to "White2" right now, in protest of this review/guy's existence. I'll Sunn O))) him to hell.

Negged without an explanation. Not cool, random user. Not cool at all.

Album Rating: 5.0

Neg.



Reason: Hobbastank 4



P.s. welcome to Sputnik

You spelled it wrong...

I do feel welcome now. Thank you, HighandDriving!

Mehhh. Phantom Neggers. What can you do about them? They neg you and disappear into the night with your radi-wait, what were we talking about?


Also, excellent first review, Joe. You do a very good job providing descriptive details. I would suggest writing a slight bit more naturally though, as I felt like you were straining yourself a bit for vocabulary. Often times people forget that big words used to have a very precise meaning, and while I'm certainly not saying that's the case for you, I feel like the review would have a much better flow and feel much more natural to read, but I'm sure that'll come with time as well.